EPISODE 1 : No Fear

[Anunnaki]

EPISODE 1 : No Fear

D Zehaha : So i’m surrounded

Flashback [Emin : Listen D, once you join MW, no matter how many
enemies you face stay on your feet, keep fighting and never run back.]



Syrtis : You are alone, we have 50, with 49 knights.
Listen Become a Syrtis and join us we can conquer the entire map at once.

D Zehaha : I have no interest in conquering anything.

No matter how you try to pressure me, I REFUSE YOUR OFFER.

Syrtis : In other words, your answer is "Please kill me right here and now" isn't it ?

D Zehaha : No, it's "i'm gonna crush every last one of you"






NEXT EPISODE : From his "nearly death" another hope appears

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EPISODE 2

D Zehaha did fall on the ground, surrounded by his blood and crying.

Syrtis : Kill him now

D Zehaha : I’m sorry my Nakamas, this the end for me.

Barbak (MW flying beetle – Knight): Not yet. (Blocked it all)

D, Crying heuh ? it is OK

Fear is not evil. It tells you what you weakness is. And once you know your weakness, you can become stronger as well as kinder.

Vida por favor : I know your feeling, and also that you like to do things yourself, but don’t be ashamed for asking help. I will heal you and stand up again to finish them.

Cyana : Stay back, i will do it.

Syrtis : ACA, something rushing from the back.
I see only one, don't worry we are 50 with 49 knight.
He is advancing, protect all our only conju.
The conju is already dead.
Hell what Who?
It is an arrow.

Emin : My work is already finished. Cya

Cyana : Emin fast change my rank to “Healing D”

Emin : Not again !!!

Syrtis : That one still advancing, he is about to rush, use all your auras, block. We have no more a conju.
We can’t, a lock with MOD inside us!
Kill him fast!

Jack-herer: Too late.

Syrtis : Still advancing, he is a barb !
Run all don’t stay together.
We are screwed, He is worrRm!
Call all forces to join from PP, and run all toward it.

Asdaczx (MW living legend) : mofos, none will leave this place alive.



Syrtis side
Almighty ring ring, call the whole army. All go toward PP !
Ignis side
Siraya: Lmao, let them fight each other, when the right time come i inform ignis and assassinate!
Alsius side
Saumya: Why didn't sensei come today ???

NEXT EPISODE: Syrtis, the thousand army.

[Hollow-Ichigo]

How do I unsubscribe from future episodes?

[Anunnaki]

How do I unsubscribe from future episodes?

Click back to previous episode. :¬¬:

[saumya]

pls dont include me in the next

[Anunnaki]

pls dont include me in the next

You are in the last one.

[MedicAlert]

Someone's been watching too much One Piece.

[Almighty1]

Gold D Roger v Gold Lion Conversation.

What's next ? Ichigo Kurosaki v Aizen Conversation? :superpusso:

[saumya]

Gold D Roger v Gold Lion Conversation.

What's next ? Ichigo Kurosaki v Aizen Conversation? :superpusso:

Nah, next is ''omae wa mou shindeiru''
''NANIIII?!?!?!!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??''

[Caroliiiina]

tatakae till u're dead blu kun!

[marvelheroes]

Who would win , N-Y-P-D or Hathy>?

[Morphina]

dayron barb

[Anunnaki]

New episode available XD

[saumya]

EPISODE 1 : No Fear

Emin : I cant play without 5 conjus. Cya


Syrtis side
elva Im lagging, what program do goats use to modify ping ?
Ignis side
Siraya: Tk up
Alsius side
Saumya: pls dont include me, thanks



The truth that actually happened.

[Anunnaki]

Saumya respect my story, i block u ok :smile:
Log online and come arena

[Lebeau]

Just then ... Una showed up ... ("FAQ!", they said) ... EVERYbuddy knew the party was over ... 'Day' turned to night ... night went to sleep ... cats prowling the night let sleeping dogs lie & they got along well ... oil & water mixed well too ... the Tooth Fairy left money under pillows ... Santa Claus came to town ... but then morning came & ...

:D

[_Scias_]

Cringeworthy to say the least.

Seriously, you can't just post dialogues between a bunch of random names and call that an episodic story.

Assuming you're not just trolling everyone here so I'll give the benefit of the doubt, otherwise you may use some advice for the future episodes :

- Where/When/Who/What/Why/How are the very basics of any storytelling, so you have to try to answer as much as you can especially in the first episodes. Right now we have absolutely no idea where the action takes place or even what the heck is happenning.

- Speaking of "Who", you can't just spit a bunch of character names like that without giving them a minimum of background information like simply who they are and where they come from, what's their realm/age/class/rank/clan, what are they wearing or using as weapons, their temper, physical characteristics etc... ?
We also don't know who are the main characters in your story here since none of them stands out from each other as we don't know anything about any of them. They might aswell all be NPCs with no personality whatsoever at this point.
Who's "Syrtis" ? Is it a group ? A character named Syrtis ? A Deity ? I know this might sound stupid but you just can't do that for a character that has an active place in the story. You refer to Syrtis as a realm but not as a bloody speaking character otherwise it is just plain laziness.

- Okay so a flashback happenned. How far back was that ? Why would he say that at that moment ? Who's that Emin guy anyways ?...

- Please much less dialogues and more description especially for action scenes. You can't just make whole episodes only using dialogues especially when they are this poor and/or not funny. This isn't dialogues for a comic or a movie so you have to describe what's going on outside of using dialogues else it's just horrible to read and keep track of.

- Take some example from other RO storytellers : https://www.championsofregnum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=48161

You don't have to write like Shakespeare or build walls of text but if you are serious and going to continue please put a little effort into it at least.

Good luck for Episode 3.

[Anunnaki]

Cringeworthy to say the least.

Seriously, you can't just post dialogues between a bunch of random names and call that an episodic story.

Assuming you're not just trolling everyone here so I'll give the benefit of the doubt, otherwise you may use some advice for the future episodes :

- Where/When/Who/What/Why/How are the very basics of any storytelling, so you have to try to answer as much as you can especially in the first episodes. Right now we have absolutely no idea where the action takes place or even what the heck is happenning.

- Speaking of "Who", you can't just spit a bunch of character names like that without giving them a minimum of background information like simply who they are and where they come from, what's their realm/age/class/rank/clan, what are they wearing or using as weapons, their temper, physical characteristics etc... ?
We also don't know who are the main characters in your story here since none of them stands out from each other as we don't know anything about any of them. They might aswell all be NPCs with no personality whatsoever at this point.
Who's "Syrtis" ? Is it a group ? A character named Syrtis ? A Deity ? I know this might sound stupid but you just can't do that for a character that has an active place in the story. You refer to Syrtis as a realm but not as a bloody speaking character otherwise it is just plain laziness.

- Okay so a flashback happenned. How far back was that ? Why would he say that at that moment ? Who's that Emin guy anyways ?...

- Please much less dialogues and more description especially for action scenes. You can't just make whole episodes only using dialogues especially when they are this poor and/or not funny. This isn't dialogues for a comic or a movie so you have to describe what's going on outside of using dialogues else it's just horrible to read and keep track of.

- Take some example from other RO storytellers : https://www.championsofregnum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=48161

You don't have to write like Shakespeare or build walls of text but if you are serious and going to continue please put a little effort into it at least.

Good luck for Episode 3.

First of all those are not random names ,those are Nemon Heros.
Second i'm just trolling.
Third thanks for advices
Fourth you will be introduced in my 3 episode. :drinks:

[Anunnaki]

Just then ... Una showed up ... ("FAQ!", they said) ... EVERYbuddy knew the party was over ... 'Day' turned to night ... night went to sleep ... cats prowling the night let sleeping dogs lie & they got along well ... oil & water mixed well too ... the Tooth Fairy left money under pillows ... Santa Claus came to town ... but then morning came & ...

:D

SUP ;} face guy

[Drago-I]

Next episode: dayron lopiko's butt shaking of fear, he quickly switched realm and begged drago I to spare his life and show some mercy in his aliens language.

dayron: hi
drago: hi
dayron: do not killed, i'm serioslty i'm alsius.
drago: ?
dayron: you fuck i ignore no killed stop drago I
it does not matter stupid i bad talking chat killed i'm alsius
drago: lol wtf?
dayron: serioslty, you fuck asshole bye stupido.
Left the chat

[Anunnaki]

Next episode: dayron lopiko's butt shaking of fear, he quickly switched realm and begged drago I to spare his life and show some mercy in his aliens language.

dayron: hi
drago: hi
dayron: do not killed, i'm serioslty i'm alsius.
drago: ?
dayron: you fuck i ignore no killed stop drago I
it does not matter stupid i bad talking chat killed i'm alsius
drago: lol wtf?
dayron: serioslty, you fuck asshole bye stupido.
Left the chat

I should remove the stories and just post dayron chat here that would be more funny

[Drago-I]

I should remove the stories and just post dayron chat here that would be more funny

yeah, but mine is a true story and got ss of it, i tried to post it here but i couldn't cos ss size even after editing it several times.

[Anunnaki]

Episode 3 is out.
It includes Longs & Tania

[Caroliiiina]

Episode 3 is out.
It includes Longs & Tania

Where is it ? D:

[Anunnaki]

Where is it ? D:

Not available yet on forum for public

http://i.imgur.com/S9DYgAk.jpg

[Caroliiiina]

Not available yet on forum for public

http://i.imgur.com/S9DYgAk.jpg

Buee :( Looking foward for it

[Proviva]

where's part 3?

[Anunnaki]

Because mysha asked i put it for free.

Syrtis side: Almighty called Syrtis

>>> thousand army heading pp.

Ignis side: Siraya informed Ignis

>>> Longs army heading to pb, what is their plan ??

Alsius side: still a hug fight

>>> most of syrtis died, rest running to pp
>>> Tania created a post in forum complaining about speed hack and how syrtis running faster than everyone to pp.



worrRm : Let’s finish them and head to pp, payback

Compost : Ring ring,
Emin I’m at herb with Juvia Loxar and I track at least 1000 syrtis coming to pp, and pb side Siraya and Longs are advancing

Emin : we are advancing as well to pp, i have a bad feeling.



Asdaczx : Where is syrtis , found me more to kill

here is one !

that hamster will die !

D zehaha : No stop please

# An arrow fall in front of Asdzczx

Emin : Not this one

Asdaczx : What ?

he is in our land

I will finish him right now

who’s that again !

# D zehaha stopped Asdaczx sword

D zehaha : You are wrong, listen we are the ones on his land !



Flashback ## The true history ## 800 YEARS AGO

Once there was a kingdom on this planet that has an advanced science technology and its's name was the Ancient Kingdom or the kingdom of hamsters.

This kingdom managed to create a peaceful and perfect world, and they accepted everyone and every race and allowed everyone to use their technologies.

At a certain point, a secret organization called NGD come from the moon, started a war and tried to invad this planet but they failed after fighting the AK for more than 100 years. they couldn’t even reach or descend to this land.

Till a day has come when they discovered the weakness of the Ancient Kingdom, thanks to a certain group that betrayed the AK and made an alliance with NGD after giving them a few ximerin from the moon.

Yes the kingdom of hamster was so attached to nature, and all their technology was built to avoid harming it. It was built based and mainly to use solar energy.

After another 100 years, NGD did come with 2 weapons built with the help of the group that betrayed AK, the first weapon was used to stop sun rays and weaken the ancient kingdom, and the second was a powerful cannon that they said can destroy an entire island .

With those 2 weapons and the help of the traitors, the kingdom of hamsters was destroyed, history was totally erased, and the AK was devided in 3 kingdoms Alsius & Ignis & Syrtis, hatred started, war started and peace ended.

Many hamsters get captured and escalved by NGD, they even started selling them to other races as stash carrier and a pets.

The hamsters who survived to the war ran away to hide, and they decided to take the “D.” as a middle name to make them recognize. They wanted to live and pass their will to the next generation.

This land belongs to them the kingdom of hamsters and we are the ones in their land.


NEXT EPISODE : Is Longs and other hamsters related to AK ? what is their plan ?
The clash and hug war started at PP.