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Angelwinged_Devil
08-14-2008, 11:29 AM
the leaves of our trees are falling as time passes by
the hordes trample together when they heed my battlecry
once the leaves have fallen to the ground
there will be only dead bodies to be found

my hands will shiver no not shiver right now
not until the battle stops it's flow
as yet another body vanquishes in a firery gore
I keep wondering what we are fighting for

the green leaves I watched as a child
are no longer soft and mild
blood is the new colour of Syrtis
what will it take to end this

Static_Fang
08-14-2008, 11:35 AM
the leaves of our trees are falling as time passes by
the hordes trample together when they heed my battlecry
once the leaves have fallen to the ground
there will be only dead bodies to be found

my hands will shiver no not shiver right now
not until the battle stops it's flow
as yet another body vanquishes in a firery gore
I keep wondering what we are fighting for

the green leaves I watched as a child
are no longer soft and mild
blood is the new colour of Syrtis
what will it take to end this

I thought i was the only1 that made poems xD Good one btw

phoenix_jackson
08-14-2008, 12:05 PM
I love it AwD!
I wish you make plenty. Then make audio. Then make video! So on and so forth.

Crowbane
08-14-2008, 02:17 PM
Nice very very Nice.


More please and maybe other realms will join in too. I hope this don't get spammed (what am I saying this is The Inn).


For Syrtis

Andaaron
08-14-2008, 02:48 PM
Yeah nice one AwD keep it up and maybe we can get some more people to contribute .:metal:

Pizdzius
08-14-2008, 02:55 PM
A little bit gory, morbid and I hear death metal in the background as I read this

xD but the overall idea is really nice, although I am not a fan of paired rhymes
:thumb_up:

Inkster
08-14-2008, 05:32 PM
Im actually very surprised, it shows undertones of a sensitive nature

Angel_de_Combate
08-14-2008, 07:09 PM
Lovely poem...xDDDDD

Angelwinged_Devil
08-14-2008, 10:31 PM
A little bit gory, morbid and I hear death metal in the background as I read this

xD but the overall idea is really nice, although I am not a fan of paired rhymes
:thumb_up:
the lines just poppet up in my head

I was listening to "yasunori mitsuda - kaeru(frog)'s theme" actually :p

and I'm glad you like it, thank you :D, I shal post another one when it comes to my mind, and so they shal

Roldier
08-15-2008, 01:15 AM
Bark! A poem in English! I don't Know I Life For See :piz: