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Angel_de_Combate
09-05-2008, 08:36 PM
Ok you think might this is slightly sad, but im very very proud right now, my son Jared..wrote a poem..about making a difference in the world and it got entered into Young Writers' The Big Green Poetry Machine competition !!
Every year they have in excess of 25,000 poems from all over the UK and overseas..so the fact he got picked to get his poem published is totally awesome...so allow me to be proud mother for 5 mins and let me share his poem with you all. xD ps.he came 2nd overall in Staffordshire, as it was divided into regions :)

War

The gun is no fun, it weighs a ton
The bullets setting off roaring bulls
Now it attacks a hopeless heavy body
Now there is a hopeless body dying in the misty fog.
Suddenly there in the distance, Germany joins in on the war.
My death is a send from a German bend ; my body is now no more.
Do it for John Lennon, do it for the love, that symbol of peace
It's our in hands dont waste it.

Jared Coppenhall (10)

Congratulations Jared !!!

Hell_bound
09-05-2008, 08:40 PM
Gratz to your son Jared as well as to you Emily.

:clapping5365:

Angel_de_Combate
09-05-2008, 08:43 PM
Thankyou H_B xD

Envy
09-05-2008, 08:49 PM
Pass on my congratulations to Jared :)

S_N_I_P_E_R
09-05-2008, 09:07 PM
WoW just WoW


Congrats

tyrotyro
09-05-2008, 09:11 PM
WOW and i thought i was a poet, but that was rlly good.
send my grats to jerad =")


- wen i was 13 i was accepted into the Shining Stars program, a poetry contest for 1001 lucky poets across the entire usa and i won 9th but for a 10 year old in a compition around eupore and overseas and winning 2nd is pretty amazing. =D

makarios68
09-05-2008, 10:09 PM
Smart lad.

He's a credit to his mother... :)

phoenix_jackson
09-05-2008, 10:40 PM
Congratulations to you who gave birth to such a talented child.

Keep giving birth...... errrrr.... no..... Keep honing his skills.

Angel_de_Combate
09-05-2008, 10:46 PM
Thanxs everyone..and no more babies for me i think.. :)

tyrotyro
09-05-2008, 10:52 PM
Thanxs everyone..and no more babies for me i think.. :)

U LIE

Angel_de_Combate
09-05-2008, 10:54 PM
I mean..id have to find a decent man first..really cant see that happening for a while and as they say biological clock is ticking !

Angel_de_Combate
09-05-2008, 11:00 PM
u are obulating......... >.> no that i would know. lol jk

ovulating..ermm personal question..you think :P

phoenix_jackson
09-05-2008, 11:03 PM
So no chance of a little Demon Monger's Grandchild?............ ooooooooopssssss sorry Waaaay toooooooo personal. But let him shoot his arrows your way.

Angel_de_Combate
09-05-2008, 11:06 PM
Well he cant shoot if he aint here, havent seen him in a while..he went poof :)

phoenix_jackson
09-05-2008, 11:17 PM
Well he cant shoot if he aint here, havent seen him in a while..he went poof :)

:clapping5365: :clapping5365: The true art of DMC.... going poof!!

Oh well, I wish you all the luck, child wise, more baby wise, DMC wise and poof wise.

tyrotyro
09-05-2008, 11:17 PM
/me cracks up laughing
....and he went poof :) u put a smily there xD

Static_Fang
09-05-2008, 11:29 PM
Well done lad, well done :)

ArcticWolf
09-06-2008, 03:49 AM
Congratulations!! :D