horus story knock off XD

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

Gawyn's stories inspired me to write my own. it might not be as imaginative or expandable as his but here we go...


Dry, scorched sand crunched as Hamster of Sorrow walked through the barren desert. At first he hated the desert. But over time he grew fond of it. Even though it was a hot, dry, hell of a wasteland, it has a certain charm. As the walls of samal came into sight, he could see some of his fellow Ignis standing around just outside the door.

Dune Soldier is the first to notice him “we are headed to herb, u wanna join us?”

Dispite his name, Hamster of Sorrow’s voice is deep and loud.“Sure, I got nothing better to do”

“All right! Lets head out”

The group of ignis: warriors, archers, and mages alike start at a jog towards the large stone bridge known as PB. Just as the group leaves Samal, someone yells “ACA. HUNTER TO THE RIGHT!!”. As the group realizes what is going on, Gupt is already firing his bow at Maddie Roxs, but to no avail. Before he can loose his second arrow, Overclock kicks him in the face, knocking him backwards into the dirt. By the time the others can get over, Gupt is crushed under a meteor that E’aldorm commanded down onto his body, and Overclock is already t-bagging gupt’s dead body.

Most of the group looks over at him, disgusted, while the rest of the group is laughing too hard to care. “Kicking them lil midgets are so much fun! They look like drunk Gary Coleman when they fall over!” says Hamster of Sorrow trying to stop his uncontrollable laughter.

Southman looks around a bit confused “what was he trying to accomplish? There was no way he could have survived.”

Dune Soldier spoke as though Gupt’s antics are in some way normal. “That was his attempt at hunting.”

The group starts jogging towards PB again, as if there was no interruption. Captain Nintendo spots a figure running toward the group on the horizon. As it gets closer, he identifies it at lil hathy, wounded by an arrow that is protruding out of his arm, and running as fast as his nimble legs can carry him.

“There is about 25 gelfs on their way from PB!” lil hathy’s voice is shaky and his eyes wide. “they will be here any minute! We need to head back to Samal.” By the time he finishes his sentince, his arrow wound is already healed up due to Orimae Fionn and Maltazar’s quick spells.

The Entire group pulls an abrupt about-face and sprints back to the fort. As they arrive Oppervaaghied is standing at samal, oblivious to the oncoming syrtis force. “Hey! Whats go….” Before he can finish his sentince, Maltazar yells for him to get inside the fort, his voice steady and unfaltering yet tenor and easygoing.

As the oaken doors of the fort are bolted shut, Captain Nintendo sees the syrtain force that lil hathy foretold. “They’re here!!” The archers, warlocks, and warjurers gathered on the fort walls while the warriors and support conjurers stood together in the courtyard below. The group comes in range and archers from both groups start firing arrows as fast and accurate as they could.

Rapidshot managed to fire an arrow that found its home in the shoulder of Captain Nintendo. It impaled him and knocked him backwards off the wall, the impact makes a disgusting, bone-crushing “CRRRAAACKK”. As he hit the ground, the tip of the arrow that went through his shoulder was shoved backwards into his shoulder again, doing even more damage to the already bloody and broken shoulder. If the fall itself hadn’t killed him, the arrow, now broken and splintered inside his shoulder, surely would have. Lil hathy looks down at Captain Nintendo, looks back, ducks an incoming arrow, then fires his own into the heart of the Rapidshot. The arrow is fired with such ferocity that it cuts clean through the poor syrtain and into the foot of Tigerous behind him. The barbarian roars in pain. His foot is pinned to the ground by the arrow and bleeding profusely.

The syrtain healer sidesteps another of E’aldorm’s meteors while trying to make his way to Tigerous, who is still screaming in pain. The healer sidesteps a dying pet troll, who was shot in the eye by one of Dink’s precisely aimed arrows, the blood from the troll sprays the healer as he runs past. “We are getting decimated by just standing out here. We have to get up on the side of the fort!” He jumps over a dead warlock and finally makes his way to tigerous who is almost out of breath from his constant screaming.

Dink saw what was happening and alerts the others. “They are moving to the side of the fort and we are still outnumbered 2 to 1! We can’t hold the fort for much longer!!”

[Mattdoesrock]

Nice story. \o/ (http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7328/bandwagon.jpg)

[Pwnography]

Damn dead already:tsk_tsk:

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

Damn dead already:tsk_tsk:

it had to be someone. i have not decided if there will be a possiblity of resurrection, but i doubt there will be.

also, it is possible that alts can show up even if another of their characters are dead.

[Gytha_Ogg]

So, when's chapter two coming?! I'm loving all these stories :)

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

So, when's chapter two coming?! I'm loving all these stories :)

haha i posted this less than an hour ago. but ty for the enthusiasm xD

[bois]

Good story. I look forward to the next instalment.

Artec

[Gytha_Ogg]

haha i posted this less than an hour ago. but ty for the enthusiasm xD

Lol, I hadn't noticed the posting time.

Well, it's been over THREE hours now, so... :sifflote:

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

ive been working on this in my hour and a half of study hall that i have on weekdays. so the next story should be out by friday but im not making promises.


ill try to include as many people as i can but i dont want it to seem tacked on (EX. "then out of no where....")

[Mbwana]

nice story, I really like the detail :D

(gawyn's a bad influence xD)

[Wield_II]

Nice story hammy :)

- Donato

[adraly]

very nice story

[Mashu]

...makes a disgusting, bone-crushing “CRRRAAACKK”.....The arrow is fired with such ferocity that it cuts clean through the poor syrtain and into the foot of Tigerous behind him. The barbarian roars in pain. His foot is pinned to the ground by the arrow and bleeding profusely....


Oh men!!! I would love to see those effects in regnum!! :D :punk:

[Orimae]

Wow very nice hammy!! keep em coming :thumb:


Ya'al are making me wanna right my own now...

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

NEW STORY!!!!

Sorry I couldnt get the story up sooner. thanks for all the enthusiasm, i really appreciate it. :thumb:

The sound of splintering oak rang across the desert as syrtain knights and barbarians attacked the door of Samal with all their might, doing their best to destroy the door and gain access to the fort and make it their own. Oppervaagheid walks down the ramp after healing more of lil hathy’s wounds, being careful to walk around Captain Nintendo’s body. “I don’t think the door can take much more of this. We are going to be overrun!”

Hamster of Sorrow looks over, shakes his head slightly, and chuckles a little bit. “ye of little faith. Besides, this is the fun part.” The knights and barbarians ready their armor and weapons. They huddle infront of the even more destroyed door. Hamster of Sorrow and Dune soldier violently swing the doors open, throwing a few syrtis warriors into the dirt. First the knights rush out, blocking, deflecting, and swinging weapons in a flurry of blood, battle cries, and the ringing of steel hitting steel.

Next come the barbarians, even more violent in their attacks. Hamster of Sorrow rushes to the first unlucky warrior, sidesteps the swing of syrtain’s sword, and plunges his spear into the warrior’s chest, impaling multiple organs and killing him instantly. Meanwhile, Southman charges at a syrtain archer and crashes into him shield first, knocking him onto the ground in a cloud of dust. Before the archer realizes what has happened, Southman has opened a large gash along the archer’s chest. The archer scrambles backwards and manages to avoid Southman’s hammer twice before it finally crashes into the archer’s leg with bone-crushing force. It’s leg is flattened and useless. The wood elf screams in pain but is cut short by an even deadlier hammer swing. Southman turns around wiping blood and bits of wood elf from his face, and charges back into the fight.

Dune Soldier notices a stray warlock that is raising a glowing staff. A sure sign of Sultar’s Terror. Before the warlock can finish his spell, dune kicks him onto the ground. Unfortunately, before Dune can strike the helpless warlock, he is struck in the leg by a sword, sending searing pain through his leg. As he turns around to face his attacker, he swings his spear like a bat and connects with the side of tigerous’s head, knocking him unconscious and splitting the side of his head open. Orimae fionn saw what had happened and ran to help. However, Scias also saw this and summoned an ivy plant under Orimae’s feet, trapping her there and opening small cuts on her feet and ankles. This caused more of the syrtain force to take notice and rush to finish the poor healer off.

Overclock finished off his current adversary and turned toward Orimae. He saw what was about to take place and tried to attract their attention long enough for Orimae to escape. He roared with such anger and volume that it stunned the attackers, temporarily deafening them. Orimae took notice of this and hastened to free herself from the painful bonds. Just as she finally got free of the ivy, rushed to Dune Soldier who was still struggling to stand on his injured leg. She raised her staff and brought it to the ground. Dune’s gash that had made his leg virtually useless, mended itself together and sealed up as if it never even happened. He was still in pain, but the conjurer’s work had repaired his leg enough for him to fight.

Hamster of Sorrow had been oblivious to the previous ordeal. He had been in a rather lengthy fight with a knight who just didn’t want to die. When he finally finished the knight off, he ran to the nearest opponent who was stuck in the head by an arrow before Hamster could even raise his spear. “What the hell dink? You stole my kill!”

Dink laughed and readied another arrow. “Maybe you should be faster next time! You look like you need the help anyway.”

Hamster of Sorrow looked down at his chest and arms to find that he is gashed and bloody all over. He had been cut up by various adversaries and, in the heat of the battle, disregarded his own wellbeing. He immediately decided that he was in no shape to continue fighting and headed back toward what was left of the door. Just before he could get the door closed an arrow struck him in the side, causing him to collapse just inside the fort. Maltazar, who was still inside the fort, hurried over, shut the door completely and, without a word, began repairing the wound. Hamster tried to prop himself up against a wall, causing the arrow to dig in farther.

“Stop moving if you want to live. It was a miracle that the arrow didn’t kill you in the first place!”

Hamster of sorrow grunts and spits blood onto the ground beside him. “hmph, lucky me” Maltazar glares at him, then rips the arrow out of hamster’s side causing blood to squirt out. “Damn it malt! You coulda gave me a bit of advance notice before ripping my freakin’ lung out!” Before any more damage could be done, he seals up the wound in the same way that Orimae Fionn did to Dune Soldier.

“Do me a favor and take it easy for a while. Ok hamster?”

“I can’t, not while my friends are out there dying.” He jumps up, grabs his spear then slams the door open to find that the battle is over and that, save a few minor injuries, the group of ignis is uninjured. Everyone outside the doors looks over to see the cause of the loud noise, and finds Hamster, red-faced and embarrassed, standing in the doorway. Hamster looks back to Maltazar who bursts into a fit of laughter.

“Take it easy! The fight is over. Settle down.” Lil Hathy walks off the ramp, past Hamster, toward Tigerous who is, just now, waking up from being whacked in the side of the head by Dune’s spear. Hathy delivers a swift kick to the same spot on his head and Tigerous goes unconscious again.

At this point, im not sure where the story is going. im thinking about having a battle between ignis and alsius. please feel free to post any ideas you might have.

[Gytha_Ogg]

:thumb: Good stuff!

[Silent_Shadow]

Awesome! I cant wait for the next :swordfight:

[Orimae]

Excellent work hammy :clapclap:

And zomg!!!! im famous!!! :wub2: ty hammypants

[Ulti19]

I just read through these first time today, nice job:punk:
Many regnum gamers are very creative. Maybe in a couple of years we will see a holleywood movie based on it^^

On another note, you said to post ideas between alsius and ignis fight. Maybe an epic bridge battle?

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

I just read through these first time today, nice job:punk:
Many regnum gamers are very creative. Maybe in a couple of years we will see a holleywood movie based on it^^

On another note, you said to post ideas between alsius and ignis fight. Maybe an epic bridge battle?

i like it!!!

[Mbwana]

YES! bridge fight plz :D

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

i have gotten a few negative comments about these stories (thanks for the constuctive feedback) and i would just like to clarify, just because i used the word kick doesnt mean it has to use the move kick. it is an action, not a skill. When Oveclock kicks gupt into the dirt, that is the MOVE kick. when lil hathy delivers as swift kick to Tigerous's head, that is an action. just because you carry a bow doesnt mean you can't use your feet.

second of all, i used mostly characters from imperial guard because i know a lot about these people and their fighting styles etc.

thanks for all the feed back, positive and negative, and i will keep it in mind while writing future stories

[Gytha_Ogg]

One possibility: Capitalize the term to indicate it's the skill or spell, lowercase means it's just an action.

Overclock Kicks Gupt, but Lil Hathy kicks Tigerous.

[Silent_Shadow]

I hope you don't mind me editing your stories once in a while, but if you do then I won't lol.
I found some mistakes, but nothing that bad. The words in blue are what I corrected. A few suggestions: watch your capitalization and where you put pronouns, and it's best to keep the tenses the same.



The sound of splintering oak rang across the desert as syrtain knights and barbarians attacked the door of Samal with all their might, doing their best to destroy the door and gain access to the fort and make it their own. Oppervaagheid walked down the ramp after healing more of Lil Hathy’s wounds, being careful to walk around Captain Nintendo’s body. “I don’t think the door can take much more of this. We are going to be overrun!”

Hamster of Sorrow looked over, shook his head slightly, and chuckled a little bit. “Ye of little faith. Besides, this is the fun part.” The knights and barbarians readied their armor and weapons. They huddled infront of the even more destroyed door. Hamster of Sorrow and Dune Soldier violently swung the doors open, throwing a few syrtis warriors into the dirt. First the knights rushed out, blocking, deflecting, and swinging weapons in a flurry of blood, battle cries, and the ringing of steel hitting steel.

Next came the barbarians, even more violent in their attacks. Hamster of Sorrow rushed to the first unlucky warrior, sidestepped the swing of syrtain’s sword, and plunged his spear into the warrior’s chest, impaling multiple organs and killing him instantly. Meanwhile, Southman charged at a syrtain archer and crashed into him shield first, knocking him onto the ground in a cloud of dust. Before the archer realized what had happened, Southman had opened a large gash along the archer’s chest. The archer scrambled backwards and managed to avoid Southman’s hammer twice before it finally crashed into the archer’s leg with bone-crushing force. It’s leg was flattened and useless. The wood elf screamed in pain but was cut short by an even deadlier hammer swing. Southman turned around, wiping blood and bits of wood elf from his face, and charged back into the fight.

Dune Soldier noticed a stray warlock that was raising a glowing staff. A sure sign of Sultar’s Terror. Before the warlock could finish his spell, Dune kicked him onto the ground. Unfortunately, before Dune could strike the helpless warlock, he was struck in the leg by a sword, sending searing pain through his leg. As he turned around to face his attacker, he swung his spear like a bat and connected with the side of Tigerous’s head, knocking him unconscious and splitting the side of his head open. Orimae Fionn saw what had happened and ran to help. However, Scias also saw this and summoned an ivy plant under Orimae’s feet, trapping her there and opening small cuts on her feet and ankles. This caused more of the syrtain force to take notice and rush to finish the poor healer off.

Overclock finished off his current adversary and turned toward Orimae. He saw what was about to take place and tried to attract their attention long enough for Orimae to escape. He roared with such anger and volume that it stunned the attackers, temporarily deafening them. Orimae took notice of this and hastened to free herself from the painful bonds. Just as she finally got free of the ivy, she rushed to Dune Soldier who was still struggling to stand on his injured leg. She raised her staff and brought it to the ground. Dune’s gash that had made his leg virtually useless, mended itself together and sealed up as if it never even happened. He was still in pain, but the conjurer’s work had repaired his leg enough for him to fight.

Hamster of Sorrow had been oblivious to the previous ordeal. He had been in a rather lengthy fight with a knight who just didn’t want to die. When he finally finished the knight off, he ran to the nearest opponent who was stuck in the head by an arrow before Hamster could even raise his spear. “What the hell Dink? You stole my kill!”

Dink laughed and readied another arrow. “Maybe you should be faster next time! You look like you need the help anyway.”

Hamster of Sorrow looked down at his chest and arms to find that he was gashed and bloody all over. He had been cut up by various adversaries and, in the heat of the battle, disregarded his own wellbeing. He immediately decided that he was in no shape to continue fighting and headed back toward what was left of the door. Just before he could get the door closed an arrow struck him in the side, causing him to collapse just inside the fort. Maltazar, who was still inside the fort, hurried over, shut the door completely and, without a word, began repairing the wound. Hamster tried to prop himself up against a wall, causing the arrow to dig in farther.

“Stop moving if you want to live. It was a miracle that the arrow didn’t kill you in the first place!”

Hamster of Sorrow grunted and spat blood onto the ground beside him. “Hmph, lucky me.” Maltazar glared at him, then ripped the arrow out of Hamster’s side causing blood to squirt out. “Damn it malt! You coulda gave me a bit of advance notice before ripping my freakin’ lung out!” Before any more damage could be done, Maltazar sealed up the wound in the same way that Orimae Fionn did to Dune Soldier.

“Do me a favor and take it easy for a while. Ok Hamster?”

“I can’t, not while my friends are out there dying.” He jumped up, grabbed his spear then slammed the door open to find that the battle was over and that, save a few minor injuries, the group of ignis was uninjured. Everyone outside the doors looked over to see the cause of the loud noise, and found Hamster, red-faced and embarrassed, standing in the doorway. Hamster looked back to Maltazar who burst into a fit of laughter.

“Take it easy! The fight is over. Settle down.” Lil Hathy walked off the ramp, past Hamster, toward Tigerous who was, just now, waking up from being whacked in the side of the head by Dune’s spear. Hathy delivered a swift kick to the same spot on his head and Tigerous fell unconscious again.

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

I hope you don't mind me editing your stories once in a while, but if you do then I won't lol.
I found some mistakes, but nothing that bad. The words in blue are what I corrected. A few suggestions: watch your capitalization and where you put pronouns, and it's best to keep the tenses the same.

while i appreciate that. that post is really really long now. you could have left out the whole story in quotes. i appreciate your concern though.

[NotScias]

However, Scias also saw this and summoned an ivy plant under Orimae’s feet...

Hehe, what a coincidence. You wrote this the day I reskilled as warju xD

Anyways I'm glad to be in, and I can't wait for the next :D

[blood-raven]

good telling, need to war more, wy am i not in such a story?:p

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

good telling, need to war more, wy am i not in such a story?:p

i dont think ive ever seen you ingame before.

[blood-raven]

dno, i fight in herb rather often but as i said i need to war more:p

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

i have decided that the next stories will not have much of a story line, they will be battles. first is going to be a bridge fight at pn between ignis and alsius. the following stories will be decided by you, the reader. you tell me what you would like to read (pvp, bridge fight, fort fight, etc.) and i will at least attempt to make it happen.

[VandaMan]

i have decided that the next stories will not have much of a story line, they will be battles. first is going to be a bridge fight at pn between ignis and alsius. the following stories will be decided by you, the reader. you tell me what you would like to read (pvp, bridge fight, fort fight, etc.) and i will at least attempt to make it happen.

I would like to read a regnum online romance, about Terminator and Dark Barbarian.

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

I would like to read a regnum online romance, about Terminator and Dark Barbarian.

after thinking about this post for a solid .5 seconds. i have decided that it would be the worst possible topic of any story. it would make eyes bleed.

[Orimae]

after thinking about this post for a solid .5 seconds. i have decided that it would be the worst possible topic of any story. it would make eyes bleed.

Hammypie...you should start with something along these lines...


The two barbarians had both had a rough day slaying, one propped at each end of the bar in Medenet.....as they gulped down flaggons of mead, thier eyes met across the bar....

Dark Barbarian blushed and though 'is it really him? my nemesis? the infamous Terminator? He is much more handsom then was foretold'...

:naughty: cmon Hammy....you can dooo eeettt!!!

[Hamster_of_sorrow]

Hammypie...you should start with something along these lines...


The two barbarians had both had a rough day slaying, one propped at each end of the bar in Medenet.....as they gulped down flaggons of mead, thier eyes met across the bar....

Dark Barbarian blushed and though 'is it really him? my nemesis? the infamous Terminator? He is much more handsom then was foretold'...

:naughty: cmon Hammy....you can dooo eeettt!!!

/me shudders

that is going to go even more horribly than i thought. and with my dark, messed up mind, they would end up dying. and not like romeo and juliet

[Mals]

Damnnn, I could have discovered this already!!! I'm ALWAYS late! xD

Nice stories!! and Ham - I will hurt you the best I can when I'm healing your wounds :P

Thanks for including me! :wub2:

[Knekelvoeste]

Hamster of Sorrow +1
The other guy -1