My Online Graphic Novel ^^

[Ulti19]

After thousands of drawings, tons of story boards and numerous character design changes I'm finally putting up my comic ^^ I found a definite version of which I am happy with lol. The site is new and I still have to upload tons of stuff and work out many kinks in the sites design. But here it is :)

http://crescentedge.weebly.com/index.html

For those that like my character design and style, I think you'll enjoy it.

http://crescentedge.weebly.com/uploads/2/9/2/5/2925141/1166758.jpg?457

[Masterkick]

It is me, or in the characters section i'm seeing O'neill, Carter, and Teal'c? (even though you can't see daniel, his spirit is there, ascended, of course)

It looks good.

[Mbwana]

that's really cool ult :D one problem: I think I can only see the title page and not much else, unless you didn't upload them all yet or I'm doing something wrong :p how do you turn the page? XD

[Ulti19]

You should be able to see the main title, three main characters, and volume selection. I'm in the middle of uploading them lol. I'm trying to fix some things with the site and editing the pics for spelling etc ^^

[Syd_Vicious]

If you need help with the website design I can hook you up. You interested in doing something similar to the scantilation websites for japanese manga or something more interactive like with flash?

I'm probably going to take a break from RO as my college classes are starting up (degree by this December), but that will open up some free time for me for website design (a hobby of mine - photoshop, flash, you name it [except heavy php/java coding]). Hit me up through pm if interested and I can show you some design concepts for website layouts and such.

[Awrath]

Looks good ulti!

Just update this post when there's more content :D i'll be sure to check it out.

[Ulti19]

I just fixed a bug on the site that prevented the pictures from loading quickly. So if you had a problem with the websites speed or seeing any pic it should be fixed now^^ (/me is website noob) It should be like 10 times faster now lol. Uploaded the first 3 pages as I test how it will be viewed. Thx for the comments xD Who is oneil, teal c and carter btw? xD

[Mattdoesrock]

Who is oneil, teal c and carter btw? xD

From Stargate you pt! :P

[Ulti19]

Stargate, I never watched that xD

-Now the sites speed should be running fast for easy viewing.
-Added an illustration page that will eventually showcase many aspects of the novel and put up some more pages of the novel.
-Added a blog/comment area.

Preview of first mob :biggrin: They are blasted by a giant cannon and hurled across the skies as a weapon similar to a comet. When they crash land they uncurl and become a giant flaming golem creature ^^ (/me is dork)

http://www.weebly.com/uploads/2/9/2/5/2925141/8839875.jpg?487

[tjanex]

Nice \o/ /me loves your pics

[Pizdzius]

I have a webcomic suggestion as I had a few of them in my life - what works best is when you put the actual comic and its updates on the main page. People don't like searching for the novel around the website.

Also a little anatomy suggestion: try drawing the chins a little more outside. Atm they all look like chin-chans xD

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/51/m_a1ddcd2b5fb674081fcc64347509171b.jpg

[Mbwana]

Stargate, I never watched that xD


BLASPHEMY

(meh, I don't watch it as well xD)

[Ulti19]

Also a little anatomy suggestion: try drawing the chins a little more outside. Atm they all look like chin-chans xD



Haha yes I know I do this xD I always leave it alone thinking it looks good lol. I always draw the line further than it should be for some reason ^^

[Pizdzius]

Haha yes I know I do this xD I always leave it alone thinking it looks good lol. I always draw the line further than it should be for some reason ^^

http://what-i-do-is-secret.deviantart.com/art/Face-shading-basic-planes-70223871?q=boost%3Apopular+face+tutorial+drawing&qo=19 check this out. There are hundreds of tutorials out there, very helpful with anatomy. It takes few minutes really to remember all the basic lines :D just type in face tutorial or anything you like

[Yadi]

Nice Ulti =)

[Ulti19]

Added some more things in my spare time.

Also I was thinking and wanted to do something cool with the comic and have an honorary character section. What I wanted to do is have some people, even alot if I can, from RO appear in my comic. Your characters name would be used as well as your personality. The armor you have and look would change though because I won't draw RO looks, but I will make them similar to be recognizable, like dark elf, dwarf, etc. Also if you are, say a barbarian I will draw you 7 feet tall with axe 2x the size of yourself for example unless you're a dwarf or something^^.

This will work best with the people I know in RO. If I don't know you and you really want to make an appearance, put a description here of what kind of player you are etc. I think this will make the comic very unique and allow me to create moments of great humor.

NGD developers are more than welcome and maybe I can promote your game in my comic creativly somehow by doing this. Kailer, for example could appear as one of the leaders of the RO members as a super knight or something or a mafia boss of NGD which I would tie into my story somehow xD

If you want to be in it leave a message in this thread, or by pm, or in my blog in the graphic novel I made.

*Say your main character, I'll only use one. Name the class, female/male if I don't know you, race, etc. I think I can make something really cool out of doing this. My comic's story is set but I can add plenty to it by adjusting. Adding an RO clan of mercenaries or somthing from people who I've known as my first online community would be cool and would gather a larger audience I hope. Once I get time and post enough content I will change to my own domain and revamp the site.

It might take a really long time to make your appearance in the comic. Understand I am a one man team lol and have other things to do. But I will try defiinately to accomplish this.

Also all people from RO would appear in an honorary section I'd create, which would be similar to my main characters section.

[Gawyn_Trakkand]

gratz ulti i hope its a success, and i love the flying island (not because i'm playing a game with floating islands or anything >.>)

If you wish to use my tiny dwarf as a char then you are more than welcome though i would prefer my allods char used (he looks cooler). Either way i'd be honored to be in your first webcomic :D.

My allods char btw is human has mosty big assed plate armor with eagles emblazened all over it and glowing stones white hair and goatee and wears a glowing circlet oh and an uber 2h sword with a eagle acting as the hilt. but if you dont want him to look like that its cool xD

[Ulti19]

Allods, pfft come back xD I got high lv in that game and got bored and came back here fast lol.

I will most likely use your dwarf, because I want to promote RO if possible, but with very different armor to meet your standards^^ I can make eagled armor and glowing parts etc and the sword np. But it will be Gawyn the dwarf, part of RO mercenary team :P

Rofl maybe I will make a winged wolfs tavern for all the ro characters to assemble at, they can act as seperate team of main story as side quest things. First I want NGD to want this though. I won't draw anything like that unless they want me to publicize them. Because I cannot place RO element in my comic if developers don't want it.

[Mbwana]

if you do get to do this, it would be AWESOME

you can use my marks or conju (doesn't matter which, same with appearance :p):
Name; Mbwana
Race; nordo
Gender; male

poor observation skills and various lapses in sanity
yup, that should cover my personality ingame xD

[Gabburtjuh]

dutch wannabe (insert anything)

nordo
knight
male

More as abit suicidal, very sexy(2nd sexiest knight of alsius), loves to spamm anything anywhere.

[Dark_Barbarian]

new page new page ulti!!! i want moar!!!!

[Ulti19]

I'm just doing some other stuff atm, when I get a chance I'll start coloring the new ones and uploading them :)

Also, don't think the RO thing will happen as I don't have a green light for it, so scratch that idea^^

[Inkster]

Looking good Ulti :)

[Mbwana]

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Also, don't think the RO thing will happen as I don't have a green light for it, so scratch that idea^^

awww, that's a pity

(though you are still free to use my name :P it's unique as long as you stay away from Africa xD)

[Dark_Barbarian]

too bad he closed his site was looking very good so, all well

[Ulti19]

It's still up I just suspended it because I have no time to do it at this time. As it is I can only play ro in my night or when I have some time off as in the days im wicked busy. I hope to continue the novel, I always liked drawing but i got other stuff atm. And next year I'll be even more busy so, dunno about the novelxD

[Shiriki]

Oh damn, I didn't get to see it. Well, good luck with it! Do your best!

[Pizdzius]

It's still up I just suspended it because I have no time to do it at this time. As it is I can only play ro in my night or when I have some time off as in the days im wicked busy. I hope to continue the novel, I always liked drawing but i got other stuff atm. And next year I'll be even more busy so, dunno about the novelxD

See, and people don't get why I can't upload new page every damn day :P at least you understand there's barely time for such stuff

[Shiriki]

If everybody had their own online comic, then everybody would understand :p