You sure made a LOT of spelling mistakes for someone who lives in the U.S.
I don't like the ships thing, we have bridges.
The "huge storm" was just an example, but I don't like it either as it might finish the battle way too fast.
neutral zones are cool in the middle island.
The alliance between races and mobs is a bad idea, I mean what do you expect ? that the Utghars will command an army of orcs ?
