A little ray of light..

Angel_de_Combate · 09-05-2008, 08:36 PM

Ok you think might this is slightly sad, but im very very proud right now, my son Jared..wrote a poem..about making a difference in the world and it got entered into Young Writers' The Big Green Poetry Machine competition !!
Every year they have in excess of 25,000 poems from all over the UK and overseas..so the fact he got picked to get his poem published is totally awesome...so allow me to be proud mother for 5 mins and let me share his poem with you all.

ps.he came 2nd overall in Staffordshire, as it was divided into regions

War

The gun is no fun, it weighs a ton
The bullets setting off roaring bulls
Now it attacks a hopeless heavy body
Now there is a hopeless body dying in the misty fog.
Suddenly there in the distance, Germany joins in on the war.
My death is a send from a German bend ; my body is now no more.
Do it for John Lennon, do it for the love, that symbol of peace
It's our in hands dont waste it.

Jared Coppenhall (10)

Congratulations Jared !!!

Hell_bound · 09-05-2008, 08:40 PM

Gratz to your son Jared as well as to you Emily.

Angel_de_Combate · 09-05-2008, 08:43 PM

Thankyou H_B

Envy · 09-05-2008, 08:49 PM

Pass on my congratulations to Jared

S_N_I_P_E_R · 09-05-2008, 09:07 PM

WoW just WoW

Congrats

tyrotyro · 09-05-2008, 09:11 PM

WOW and i thought i was a poet, but that was rlly good.
send my grats to jerad =")

- wen i was 13 i was accepted into the Shining Stars program, a poetry contest for 1001 lucky poets across the entire usa and i won 9th but for a 10 year old in a compition around eupore and overseas and winning 2nd is pretty amazing. =D

makarios68 · 09-05-2008, 10:09 PM

Smart lad.

He's a credit to his mother...

09-05-2008, 08:36 PM	#1
Angel_de_Combate Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 440	A little ray of light.. Ok you think might this is slightly sad, but im very very proud right now, my son Jared..wrote a poem..about making a difference in the world and it got entered into Young Writers' The Big Green Poetry Machine competition !! Every year they have in excess of 25,000 poems from all over the UK and overseas..so the fact he got picked to get his poem published is totally awesome...so allow me to be proud mother for 5 mins and let me share his poem with you all. ps.he came 2nd overall in Staffordshire, as it was divided into regions War The gun is no fun, it weighs a ton The bullets setting off roaring bulls Now it attacks a hopeless heavy body Now there is a hopeless body dying in the misty fog. Suddenly there in the distance, Germany joins in on the war. My death is a send from a German bend ; my body is now no more. Do it for John Lennon, do it for the love, that symbol of peace It's our in hands dont waste it. Jared Coppenhall (10) Congratulations Jared !!!

09-05-2008, 08:40 PM	#2
Hell_bound Master Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 281	Gratz to your son Jared as well as to you Emily. __________________ .'. In the name of God, impure souls of the living dead shall be banished into eternal damnation. Amen. - Alucard .'.

09-05-2008, 08:49 PM	#4
Envy Master Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 400	Pass on my congratulations to Jared __________________ Pride Greed Gluttony Wrath Envy Lust Sloth There's no such thing as innocence, only degrees of guilt. Immortal Legends / Frozen Flame

09-05-2008, 09:07 PM	#5
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09-05-2008, 09:11 PM	#6
tyrotyro Initiate Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: United States of America Posts: 118	WOW and i thought i was a poet, but that was rlly good. send my grats to jerad =") - wen i was 13 i was accepted into the Shining Stars program, a poetry contest for 1001 lucky poets across the entire usa and i won 9th but for a 10 year old in a compition around eupore and overseas and winning 2nd is pretty amazing. =D __________________ Zik Tyro (Conj) 50 -- Zik Tyro (Conj) 50 -- Lone Star (Warju) 50 -- Mulana (Warlock) 50 Zikna (Knight) 30 -- Raiegh (Barb) 50 -- Robin Hood (Marks) 30

09-05-2008, 08:43 PM	#3
Angel_de_Combate Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 440	Thankyou H_B

09-05-2008, 10:09 PM	#7
makarios68 Count Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: England Posts: 1,300	Smart lad. He's a credit to his mother...

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