My Horus story

[Silent_Shadow]

+1 for the nice story, it was fun to read. Especially cause I was laughing at the sometimes bad spelling (sorry, but I always have found bad spelling funny). And really, your english isn't that bad.

[Ulti19]

Originally Posted by -ltl-

but never start describing the weather (not because I don't like it, but because its considered a bad manner of starting important texts, at least among writers)

Writers don't describe weather? You sure about that? Also writing is very subjective, one may have a style others do not appreciate, which doesn't make it wrong though. I like stories that describe settings and environment first.