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08-20-2010, 07:30 PM | #31 |
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eheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^-^ I made it in 2 chapters! yay
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Meryn You see the bodies. You see the smoke. But the Larger picture eludes you. Apocalypse
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08-20-2010, 07:56 PM | #32 |
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DB, will you marry me?
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08-20-2010, 08:41 PM | #33 |
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Epic story oO I'm getting addicted... More more moreeeeeee! I give you respect for this man I love your stories! You're just like mam in the past sitting on the bed telling stories !
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08-20-2010, 08:45 PM | #34 |
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i really like it
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08-20-2010, 08:47 PM | #35 |
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nice dark barbarian
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08-21-2010, 12:43 AM | #36 |
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Awesome man! keepthe good work up!
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08-21-2010, 02:40 AM | #37 |
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Chapter 13 The Apocalypse After getting Serena back from John Greg settles in his new fortress in the Syrtis lands but the Apocalypse is to come and its sooner then Greg noticed. on a wall in the ignis land the ancient Acolyte's of ignis sealed something that tells what is to come in the future The Time Table. made of rock and wood it is said it shows every thing that is to come in the future. Greg has it but it has a Irondementine seal which can only be open by a special key but in it was never found. Greg was resting in bed with Serena when a Guard knocked on the door and saying 'Greg! Greg! wake up! people of ignis are starting to go mad!' and then the guard plead for mercy until he was run down by an army of angry igneans. Greg said 'What in the name of the gods is going on!!' one of the igneans said 'Surrender your power Greg or will take it by force' Greg wondered why ignis is soo mad a young Teenage girl said 'please leave him alone he doesn't know' Greg said 'know what?' the people said ' the Apocalypse is coming!'. Greg wonder whats gonna happen he walked out side and saw the sky darkened and a small rocks feel from the sky some hit the soil and then one the size of a man fell and made a small but big Creator. Greg then look and said 'just as i feared the Big one coming and we have to prepare for it. Greg then Gathered the strongest of his warlocks and conjs at the ready. 3 days pasted and it has begun. A giant rock bigger then a mountain was falling from the sky Greg with all his power shadow shifted up to it he flu up soo high it felt like hes been cooked alive he then grabbed the meteor and starting using his power and focus his energy into his Strength. it was still falling and falling but it was slowing down hard. at the last min it hit the earth but Greg was under it and no Creator was made with all his power He launched it soo high and soo far it flew soo fast right into the sun. and the Great meteor was no more Greg fell down on his back complete drained of energy and he fell and sank deep into the earth and was never seen again. |
08-21-2010, 09:55 AM | #38 |
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neve seen again?? is this the end of the story?
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08-21-2010, 10:53 AM | #39 |
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nope theres more
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08-21-2010, 11:40 AM | #40 |
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Chapter 14 Resurrection 200 years have passed since Greg Disappeared and ignis is falling apart, with out there great leader Greg, Queen Rhanya is already Conquering ignis with one 1 month ignis will be destroyed and all of ignis will die. Meanwhile one person has Survived threw out time with the strong bond between female and male Serena is doing every thing in her power to bring the one love she has lost but deep down in the earth Greg in Dragon form is Gaining huge amounts of power with in 2 weeks he will rise from the earth and Destruction will be folded upon in his wake but he knows 200 years have passed and be believes his lost his love in threw out time and he will destroy every thing to revenge Serena's death. Serena is preparing for Greg's return and to tell him she lives but she did not know hes in his Dragon form so its gonna be very hard to convince the Dragon titan of the Earth that shes alive. a week has pasted and the planet is falling into chaos many forest have been destroyed by molten rock and beds of lava pouring out from the planet, Fissures opened up almost every where and began pouring out magma. Greg's time is very near and the planet will never be the same, as people from both sides struggled to survive this chaos and in the center of the Continent a giant explosion and 2 giant wings where high up and Greg is Coming from out of the earth he started walking and when he walked it felt like a earthquake then he jumped out and began flying Serena was in the Fortress Greg built long time ago and saw this titanic monster flew toward alsius. the Dragon landed in the main alsius city and began destroying every thing. Rhanya fled the city in Shadow shift but Greg was soo huge he grabbed her and flew away he then landed in the old ignis Desert and then he went into Human form. 'Rhanya by the powers of ignis and the Great gods i hear by Sentence you to death for your Ancestor's trying to Invade Ignis and destroying the Great Lake that holds the Ancient Spirits of syrtis'. Greg summoned a sword and then forced her head onto a rock he then raised the sword Rhanya then closed her eyes and just about when Greg was about to swing he was force pushed and flew into a mountain side. Serena stops the execution and Greg said 'who... who are you....' Serena said 'its me Greg don't you remember me? remember me please!' Greg said 'no it.... it cant be its been 200 years you cant live that long... its impossible' Serena says 'its possible Greg remember are strong bond it has kept us alive and it Destroyed our aging and with our love it made us Immortal please Greg remember!!'. Greg sat there and started crying Serena walked up to him and hugged him Greg said 'i missed you soo much Serena i thought i lost you for ever in time' , Rhanya shadow shifted away from them back to alsius to rebuild her Empire. Greg and Serena walked back to their Fortress in syrtis and started rebuilding their Empire as well. |
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