Torg´s Stories (English version)

Torg_Snowflake · 12-12-2007, 06:59 PM

Ok, for the ones who have no idea what I´m talknig bout:
I write stories with Regnum world as the topic. I have a complete saga called "Torg´s Story" and I´m working on one called "Small stories from Alsius".

They´re already in regnumzg, but the thing is that everything is in spanish. I´m starting to translate them, and believe mr when I say is gonna take a while, but I need help to correct grammar mistakes.

Chapter one is ready, please tell me all the mistakes you see.
http://www.regnumzg.com.ar/index.php...8&topic=2119.0

Thanks and hope you like them

DkySven · 12-12-2007, 07:10 PM

I like it! Freeze those tomatos!

12-12-2007, 06:59 PM	#1
Torg_Snowflake Initiate Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Lomas de Zamora Posts: 243	Torg´s Stories (English version) Ok, for the ones who have no idea what I´m talknig bout: I write stories with Regnum world as the topic. I have a complete saga called "Torg´s Story" and I´m working on one called "Small stories from Alsius". They´re already in regnumzg, but the thing is that everything is in spanish. I´m starting to translate them, and believe mr when I say is gonna take a while, but I need help to correct grammar mistakes. Chapter one is ready, please tell me all the mistakes you see. http://www.regnumzg.com.ar/index.php...8&topic=2119.0 Thanks and hope you like them __________________ Torg Snowflake Brujo Pirómano de Alsius, Vagallero Cornflakes y Consejero de La Jihad

12-12-2007, 07:10 PM	#2
DkySven Marquis Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 2,076	I like it! Freeze those tomatos! __________________ Dky Sven, level 54 knight (Ra) Valhalla Dky the Goat, level 35 conjurer(Ra) Dky Sven, level 51 knight(Horus) Something