My Horus story

[Tyrian]

Once there was a world called Regnum..
In the west the big utghars lived on the ice..
In the east the dark elves ruled the desserts..
And in the south elves commanded the forest..
They lived in peace, but some day this was all going to change..
And so the story begins..

It's a rainy day in the realm of Alsius, Darkness recedes with haste. The Emperror woke up, someone knocked his bedroom door. ''Come in'' he said, a heavily armored guard came in, ''Sir there is a messenger from the Great Wall'' he said. The Emperror said he could come in. When the messenger came in, the Emperror could read the fear from his face, ''speak'' the Emperror said. My Lord i saw a huge army of Igneans, they took all our forts and they are heading to the wall! The Emperror stood up and said ''what! they want to invade us?

Minutes later the Emperror arrived at his throne, all his brave generals were packed together. ''So our time has come, prepare the troops and make sure we'll be ready to strike!'' the Emperror spoke, one of the generals asked the Emperror ''You mean we are going to risk a war with Ignis?'', the Emperror stood up from his throne and shouted ''I will defend my lovely alsius for any cause! To war my brothers!'' all of them left the room, with the knowledge a lot of blood would be shed.

In the City of Hopstad, the Brave general Kervyn Cardweiler prepared himself for battle, when he walked out 200 of his bravest men were already prepaired for battle. He spoke to them like he was the Emperror himself ''Brothers, today we will strike, today we blow those enemies back to their desert caves!'' The armor clang and the mass shouted. Kervyn marched his army to the wall and saw many others gathered there, even the farmers from skolheim were represented. A big Utgharian general stood up, and spoke with the other generals, then he shouted ''send some scouts, we will need to know their position!''.

After a while 3 of the 4 scouts returned, one of them was wrapped in blood. ''my lord, they are all grouped at Trelleborg fort one of their guards attacked me, but i got away by help from an orc captian! the generals gave their armies commands, the Large Realm Gate of alsius was opened and the army marched towards Trelleborg fort. When they came close they saw a whole bunch of ignean soldiers regrouped in the fort, ''We should attack from the front'' one of the generals said, it will give as a good sight on the walls when our warriors crush the gates. the big Utghar general asked the other generals to command their archers and warlocks that everything that would appear on the wall would get killed! The soldiers of both sides prepaired. No one stands still for an instant, all are anxious for the battle to begin. All want to feel the warm sensation of blood, whether coming from an enemy or themselves, All think to themselves ''Let this blasted battle begin''. Suddenly a single arrow is shot, a knight falls dead to the ground, he will feel the blood of others no longer.

The battle has begun within a second, many fall quickly, most by arrow, the igneans are winning at first but all is soon to change.

The knights and barbarians clash on the gate, as if they are a massive wave. Then the Warlock General shouts ''sultar!'' and a massive wave of dead splits the ignean soldiers on the wall and tears them appart. Meanwhile the gate is broken and the warriors rush into the fort. Two heroic barbarians called Ares and Knekelvoeste crash on to the Guard captain and split his head from the body. Then the ignean locks sultar but they miss and hit their own soldiers, now the Alsirian warlocks sultar the walls and the ignean archers and warlocks got crushed. The Alsirian army rushed through the fort and run into the tower, Up the tower the Ignean warlord Gazzan fenixsteel and his Elite Guards where trapped, the Ignean Warlord shouted ''To death my brothers!'' the Elite Guards had to face a bunch of utghars and nordo's but resisted and blocked till Compost and Samhael two Brave alsirian hunters came out of there camo and repetition shotted them from behind. Death has nearly conquered, many now lie dead in pools of blood. And others begin to flee in fear. The igneans rush out of the fort and run for their lives, blood was every where, but there was no more fear for being invaded. The Alsirians regrouped and burried their dead brothers.

But they all knew this wasn't over yet...

To be continued...

Disclaimer: no one will be hurt by this story, except by my bad english!

Regards, Tyrian

[Ulti19]

Nice story Tyr, keep it up.

[Gawyn_Trakkand]

Indeed keep it up Tyrian I'd like to see more in game people from Tyr and Horus in it but thats my only critiscism.

[Jeeposnl]

To druk to read thsi shit mate i will look tommorow and edit this rworthless post!!

Wow I was really wasted yesterday :/ Nice story mate! you should use some noob names to that's hilarious ( rubenjacobs)

[Mbwana]

nice story

[EppicTrackage]

Originally Posted by Jeeposnl

To druk to read thsi shit mate i will look tommorow and edit this rworthless post!!

+1 just cause i rofld


Back on topic, good work tyrian. keep it up

[Comp]

Nice story...

and wewt....I killed....awesome!

[NotScias]

In the east the dark elves and the alturians lived..
And in the south elves commanded the forest..

Ahem... Alturians are from Syrtis (Unless you want Alturians to be Ignis ?)

Anyways great start, now waiting for the next stories

[Tyrian]

wish i had more time to make up some stories, just cant get the time together and the fact i cant enjoy making some more at the moment, because of some stuff going on in real life. so i'll try to makes some in the future

[-ltl-]

Very good story, but never start describing the weather (not because I don't like it, but because its considered a bad manner of starting important texts, at least among writers)

And you overused "sultar" and don't call Warlocks - locks, because, well it reminds me of the writing style of DB, haha