horus story attepmt

[jethromt]

hi i have been inspired by gawyn trakkand to make my own horus story.
Im only 14 years old and not that good with punctuation so it proberbly be a crap story but i want to try my best and want as much people to support me as much as possible. I want to hear positive feedback when the story is up,notify me if i had made punctuation mistakes and try fix it. If it ia better as planned i may make more short horus stories and maybe a long one but also later in the near future doing a combined one with gawyn would be nice so please support me and it will be up in 2-4 days