My first short Montage

bois · 09-25-2011, 02:15 PM

I liked the part from 2:28. The rest was really heavy in effects. To me a montage should be artistic but not overdone to the point that the essence is lost.
In RO montages the essence is the gameplay. Overlays and artistic exclamation points should not overpower the video it should complement and enhance it. I am trying to not be harsh but a lot of these effects just seem stuck in there with no artistic flavour or enhance your video. Sorry.
I know it is a first effort but, I figure it would be best to get the harsh bits out of the way so you can improve. Patting you on the back and saying 'good job' is not doing you any favours.

I like the music .

09-25-2011, 02:15 PM	#21
bois Count Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Trinidad and Tobago Posts: 1,194	I liked the part from 2:28. The rest was really heavy in effects. To me a montage should be artistic but not overdone to the point that the essence is lost. In RO montages the essence is the gameplay. Overlays and artistic exclamation points should not overpower the video it should complement and enhance it. I am trying to not be harsh but a lot of these effects just seem stuck in there with no artistic flavour or enhance your video. Sorry. I know it is a first effort but, I figure it would be best to get the harsh bits out of the way so you can improve. Patting you on the back and saying 'good job' is not doing you any favours. I like the music .