My Horus story - Page 2

Silent_Shadow · 05-24-2010, 02:44 PM

+1 for the nice story, it was fun to read.

Especially cause I was laughing at the sometimes bad spelling (sorry, but I always have found bad spelling funny). And really, your english isn't that bad.

Ulti19 · 05-24-2010, 04:52 PM

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Originally Posted by -ltl-

but never start describing the weather (not because I don't like it, but because its considered a bad manner of starting important texts, at least among writers)

Writers don't describe weather? You sure about that?

Also writing is very subjective, one may have a style others do not appreciate, which doesn't make it wrong though. I like stories that describe settings and environment first.

05-24-2010, 02:44 PM	#11
Silent_Shadow Pledge Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: NH, USA Posts: 31	+1 for the nice story, it was fun to read. Especially cause I was laughing at the sometimes bad spelling (sorry, but I always have found bad spelling funny). And really, your english isn't that bad. __________________ Silent Night \| Silent Shadow \| Silent Shade Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ The Dark Side has Cookies. The Cake is a Lie. Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ

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