Gawyn's Horus stories - Page 24

King_Of_Angmar · 12-06-2009, 01:28 AM

poor guy, hope that gets fixed!

Pwnography · 12-06-2009, 11:50 AM

God damn it how am i supposed to last that long????

Immune · 12-06-2009, 03:37 PM

/me is immune to impatience.

...I still can't wait though

Gawyn_Trakkand · 12-08-2009, 05:02 PM

ok guys all is fixed now expect to see a new story in a couple of days ^^

Comp · 12-08-2009, 05:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gawyn_Trakkand

ok guys all is fixed now expect to see a new story in a couple of days ^^

Awesome - I hope I'm depicted with a bozooka and 'gasm grenades

Compost...

Mbwana · 12-09-2009, 01:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gawyn_Trakkand

ok guys all is fixed now expect to see a new story in a couple of days ^^

whoot! I can barely wait

Xero_Aurion · 12-10-2009, 03:24 PM

These are really great stories to read!

Do you think a web page to place all your stories by "chapters" or something would be beneficial to you?

Of course that decision is up to you.

Gawyn_Trakkand · 12-11-2009, 04:33 AM

Hey guys here is the next installment, hope you like it. Zero i havent thought about it personally if i where to have my own website i might be tempted to do a comic version of this storyline (i can draw well but like i said in post 1 not a scratch on piz) anways enjoy!

Gawyn opened his eyes the light around him blurring his vision slightly,
"Why the hell am i not dead" he thought.
He looked around and slowly got to his hands and knees from the floor. Shaking his head he glanced over his left shoulder, there stood a man garbed in dragon armour sheild in one hand a spear on his back and Smurvs spear in his other hand. He was tall very tall for an alturian and his tall mohawk made him only look taller.
'Roofus....How the.... what the.... nevermind'
Roofus glanced over his shoulder, never really taking his eye of Smurv.
'Run along now Gawyn, the big boys have to play.'
Though Gawyn had the highest respect for Roofus and would freely admit he was dead if it wasnt for him, he still wanted to get back at him for the remark with a witty retort.
'yeah well you're a.... a ........ knight that wears bad piercing resist armour.'
Both Smurv and Roofus where looking at Gawyn with strange expressions, Smurv muttered under his breath.
'ooohhh burn.'
'yeah well i have just had the shit kicked out of me. Screw you guys i'm going home.'
Gawyn picked up his spear and left the same way that Arwen went. Roofus and Smurv looked at each other and shruged, Roofus tossed Smurv his spear.
'Ok lets do this.'

Meanwhile walking through the Alsian part of the forest battleground, Mattdoesblock led his team. Rykor, Jippy, K A R M A, Gringgo and Immune the Blue followed the dwarf. Rykor jumped at the chance to go to the Syrtian camp they killed his brother Kyrottimus he wanted vengence. The Syrtian camp was just on the alsian side of the bridge connecting the two realms, about an hours march to aggersborg fort. The main road was littered with hunters they would be masacred going through there, so matt led them through the undergrowth of the dense forest coming up to the camp he whispered.
'keep it down now guys and watch every step.'
Gringgo looked around with a puzzled look and shouted to Matt
'What! Sorry you'll have to speak up!.'
Matt looked at Gringgo with a hard stare and Karma elbowed him in the ribs.
'Idiot.....'
Immune came from the forest seemingly fading in from the air.
'They are keeping Klutu tied between two trees, He's about 20 ft in the air he's being guarded by 4 warriors.'
Matt crouched to the floor as immune started to draw in the dirt with a stick. He started to draw the outline of the camp and rough squares for the tents.
'Klutu is positioned here, we are here. we will have to cross the camp this way any slip up and we have an almighty fight on our hands they out number the entire alsian army 3 to 1 and more keep coming in via the bridge.'
Matt stroked his beard thoughtfully.
'Well Gringgo and Immune can sneak into the camp undetected. Me, Rykor and Jippy will take care of the guards and make a diversion for you to get away. Karma you can help with the distraction but Klutu will more than likely need healing and i'm sure there are some weapons and armor we can put him in around here.'

Gawyn arrived at the Syrtian camp. He was caught as he collapsed into the arms of Shrikant from exhaustion.
'Gwynavere.....'
'She is fine Gawyn she is here i'll send word, rest now'
Gawyn passed out.

Matt and co made it to the area where klutu was being held. Whoever was incharge wasnt messing about with the guards, some of Syrtis's finest where around the base. Jaud, Bulgaro, Meleager, Jakob and Rios stood alert around the base. The darkness kept them shrouded for the most part and the torches around the base of Klutu's posistion revealed their enemy to them. Immune piped up.
'Why have they just increased the guard?'
Matt grimaced and stroked his beard some more
'Hmph never the less we have a job to do, no matter how suicidal'
Karma shook her head and stood up, Matt and the others looked at her like she just stripped naked.
'What are you doing! you'll get us killed!'
'shh watch.'
she walked toward the warriors, all 6 of them spotted her and instantly drew their blades charging for her. She placed her staff into the ground in front of her, the air around her shimmered and the warriors as they came at her slowed down until they came to a complete stop. She aimed her staff at klutu, white light poured over him and he let out a gasp as if he had been dunked in ice water.
'Immune, Gringgo now!.'
The two hunters ran forward and aimed their bows, they simultaniously let an arrow each fly. The arrows cut through the ropes holding the barbarian. Klutu started to plummet to the ground and Jippy dived forward catching him. Rykor came to help Jippy hold im up and all of them ran into the darkness, holding Klutu as they ran. Karma looked at the frozen rios and uncuppled his massive sword
'I'm just going to borrow this.'
She kissed him on the cheek and set off after the others, a massive alarm wrang out through the night.

Gawyn bolted upright a bandage around his mid section, he must have broken a couple of ribs he winced at the pain. As soon as his head left a soft pillow, he noticed a small palm on his chest pushing him back down. He turned his head to Gwynavere her smile filling the room she stroked his hair back from his face.
'You had me worried for a second there.'
Gawyn grabbed onto Gwynavere and held her gently in his strong grip against him, pain shot through his side but he didnt care. He had his love in his arms again and this time he wasnt leaving her side. Gwynavere tapped Gawyn on the shoulder.
'It's lovely that you are happy to see me but i cant breath.'
Gawyn noticed an alarm going off through the camp he looked at Gwynavere.
'Intruders made off with SoL, they are aranging a search party of far too many men to hunt them down about 20 in all but thats how syrtis like to do things 3 on 1.'
Gawyn shook his head and a flash of the burning image that caused him to claw out his eyes came back to him.
'I need to speak to Isemon immediatly.'

Isemon stood in his tent, a huge canopy with a desk and divider with his sleeping quarters behind it. He stood looking at an ancient tapastry on one wall.
'This column you saw, where is it?'
'I cant remember to well but if i had to give a rough area it would be here close to the edge of the lake of ancients, on the alsian side.'
Isemon rounded on Gawyn, being a wood elf he dwarfed Gawyn. He gripped Gawyn by the shoulder and looked at him sternly, the warmth he emitted seemed to turn to a fire.
'Gawyn it is of great importance you remember the precise location!'
Gawyn grimaced and removed isemons hand from his shoulder.
'Like i said i was being chased the entire time, I can only give you a rough idea of where abouts it is.'
Isemon looked irritated... he combed his fingers through his hair.
'I'm sorry Gawyn SoL escaping and being infiltrated so easily has got me on edge.'
Gawyn nodded to Isemon
'well there is nothing else for it we're going to have to go look for it, you, Gwynavere and I.'

Xero_Aurion · 12-11-2009, 04:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gawyn_Trakkand

Zero I haven't thought about it personally if I were to have my own website. I might be tempted to do a comic version of this storyline. (I can draw well but like I said in post #1, not a scratch on Piz)

I didn't necessarily mean a comic, I was wondering about a site where parts of the story is broken down to chapters and we click the link and the next page is the story for us to read. I wouldn't worry about drawing pictures though

Here's a quote I just thought of: "Imagination is the primary truth to how we read ourselves and others"

Applied here, this statement means that you wouldn't need to draw pictures, since the picture is drawn in our minds as we read such great stories. Think of that when you read a book next time ^_^

Anyways, the idea of a web page came to mind since I thought maybe it might be easier than just scrolling through a bunch of forum pages? Your call though. Once again, great stories.

(Sorry I proofread your quote at the top of my statement

)

Gawyn_Trakkand · 12-11-2009, 01:59 PM

Yeah I might look into it as the stories progress. I can see how it would be difficult for new readers and old ones trying to read other stories from a while back.

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12-06-2009, 01:28 AM	#231
King_Of_Angmar Banned Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Wherever lag has Teleported me Posts: 99	poor guy, hope that gets fixed!

12-06-2009, 11:50 AM	#232
Pwnography Initiate Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 195	God damn it how am i supposed to last that long????

12-08-2009, 05:02 PM	#234
Gawyn_Trakkand Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cheshire, England Posts: 219	ok guys all is fixed now expect to see a new story in a couple of days ^^

12-11-2009, 04:33 AM	#238
Gawyn_Trakkand Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cheshire, England Posts: 219	Hey guys here is the next installment, hope you like it. Zero i havent thought about it personally if i where to have my own website i might be tempted to do a comic version of this storyline (i can draw well but like i said in post 1 not a scratch on piz) anways enjoy! Gawyn opened his eyes the light around him blurring his vision slightly, "Why the hell am i not dead" he thought. He looked around and slowly got to his hands and knees from the floor. Shaking his head he glanced over his left shoulder, there stood a man garbed in dragon armour sheild in one hand a spear on his back and Smurvs spear in his other hand. He was tall very tall for an alturian and his tall mohawk made him only look taller. 'Roofus....How the.... what the.... nevermind' Roofus glanced over his shoulder, never really taking his eye of Smurv. 'Run along now Gawyn, the big boys have to play.' Though Gawyn had the highest respect for Roofus and would freely admit he was dead if it wasnt for him, he still wanted to get back at him for the remark with a witty retort. 'yeah well you're a.... a ........ knight that wears bad piercing resist armour.' Both Smurv and Roofus where looking at Gawyn with strange expressions, Smurv muttered under his breath. 'ooohhh burn.' 'yeah well i have just had the shit kicked out of me. Screw you guys i'm going home.' Gawyn picked up his spear and left the same way that Arwen went. Roofus and Smurv looked at each other and shruged, Roofus tossed Smurv his spear. 'Ok lets do this.' Meanwhile walking through the Alsian part of the forest battleground, Mattdoesblock led his team. Rykor, Jippy, K A R M A, Gringgo and Immune the Blue followed the dwarf. Rykor jumped at the chance to go to the Syrtian camp they killed his brother Kyrottimus he wanted vengence. The Syrtian camp was just on the alsian side of the bridge connecting the two realms, about an hours march to aggersborg fort. The main road was littered with hunters they would be masacred going through there, so matt led them through the undergrowth of the dense forest coming up to the camp he whispered. 'keep it down now guys and watch every step.' Gringgo looked around with a puzzled look and shouted to Matt 'What! Sorry you'll have to speak up!.' Matt looked at Gringgo with a hard stare and Karma elbowed him in the ribs. 'Idiot.....' Immune came from the forest seemingly fading in from the air. 'They are keeping Klutu tied between two trees, He's about 20 ft in the air he's being guarded by 4 warriors.' Matt crouched to the floor as immune started to draw in the dirt with a stick. He started to draw the outline of the camp and rough squares for the tents. 'Klutu is positioned here, we are here. we will have to cross the camp this way any slip up and we have an almighty fight on our hands they out number the entire alsian army 3 to 1 and more keep coming in via the bridge.' Matt stroked his beard thoughtfully. 'Well Gringgo and Immune can sneak into the camp undetected. Me, Rykor and Jippy will take care of the guards and make a diversion for you to get away. Karma you can help with the distraction but Klutu will more than likely need healing and i'm sure there are some weapons and armor we can put him in around here.' Gawyn arrived at the Syrtian camp. He was caught as he collapsed into the arms of Shrikant from exhaustion. 'Gwynavere.....' 'She is fine Gawyn she is here i'll send word, rest now' Gawyn passed out. Matt and co made it to the area where klutu was being held. Whoever was incharge wasnt messing about with the guards, some of Syrtis's finest where around the base. Jaud, Bulgaro, Meleager, Jakob and Rios stood alert around the base. The darkness kept them shrouded for the most part and the torches around the base of Klutu's posistion revealed their enemy to them. Immune piped up. 'Why have they just increased the guard?' Matt grimaced and stroked his beard some more 'Hmph never the less we have a job to do, no matter how suicidal' Karma shook her head and stood up, Matt and the others looked at her like she just stripped naked. 'What are you doing! you'll get us killed!' 'shh watch.' she walked toward the warriors, all 6 of them spotted her and instantly drew their blades charging for her. She placed her staff into the ground in front of her, the air around her shimmered and the warriors as they came at her slowed down until they came to a complete stop. She aimed her staff at klutu, white light poured over him and he let out a gasp as if he had been dunked in ice water. 'Immune, Gringgo now!.' The two hunters ran forward and aimed their bows, they simultaniously let an arrow each fly. The arrows cut through the ropes holding the barbarian. Klutu started to plummet to the ground and Jippy dived forward catching him. Rykor came to help Jippy hold im up and all of them ran into the darkness, holding Klutu as they ran. Karma looked at the frozen rios and uncuppled his massive sword 'I'm just going to borrow this.' She kissed him on the cheek and set off after the others, a massive alarm wrang out through the night. Gawyn bolted upright a bandage around his mid section, he must have broken a couple of ribs he winced at the pain. As soon as his head left a soft pillow, he noticed a small palm on his chest pushing him back down. He turned his head to Gwynavere her smile filling the room she stroked his hair back from his face. 'You had me worried for a second there.' Gawyn grabbed onto Gwynavere and held her gently in his strong grip against him, pain shot through his side but he didnt care. He had his love in his arms again and this time he wasnt leaving her side. Gwynavere tapped Gawyn on the shoulder. 'It's lovely that you are happy to see me but i cant breath.' Gawyn noticed an alarm going off through the camp he looked at Gwynavere. 'Intruders made off with SoL, they are aranging a search party of far too many men to hunt them down about 20 in all but thats how syrtis like to do things 3 on 1.' Gawyn shook his head and a flash of the burning image that caused him to claw out his eyes came back to him. 'I need to speak to Isemon immediatly.' Isemon stood in his tent, a huge canopy with a desk and divider with his sleeping quarters behind it. He stood looking at an ancient tapastry on one wall. 'This column you saw, where is it?' 'I cant remember to well but if i had to give a rough area it would be here close to the edge of the lake of ancients, on the alsian side.' Isemon rounded on Gawyn, being a wood elf he dwarfed Gawyn. He gripped Gawyn by the shoulder and looked at him sternly, the warmth he emitted seemed to turn to a fire. 'Gawyn it is of great importance you remember the precise location!' Gawyn grimaced and removed isemons hand from his shoulder. 'Like i said i was being chased the entire time, I can only give you a rough idea of where abouts it is.' Isemon looked irritated... he combed his fingers through his hair. 'I'm sorry Gawyn SoL escaping and being infiltrated so easily has got me on edge.' Gawyn nodded to Isemon 'well there is nothing else for it we're going to have to go look for it, you, Gwynavere and I.'

12-11-2009, 01:59 PM	#240
Gawyn_Trakkand Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cheshire, England Posts: 219	Yeah I might look into it as the stories progress. I can see how it would be difficult for new readers and old ones trying to read other stories from a while back.