Horus story the legend of Dark Barbarian - Page 2

Angel_de_Combate · 04-20-2010, 06:36 PM

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Originally Posted by j4np0l

Let me have mine

It was just a funny comment, I like his story

It made my eyes hurt.

j4np0l · 04-20-2010, 06:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Angel_de_Combate

It made my eyes hurt.

Yeah, that too

Anpu · 04-20-2010, 06:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Pizdzius

You should fix those words:
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I suggest NGD to install forum mod "Spelling check". Might be useful.

Gytha_Ogg · 04-20-2010, 06:55 PM

I like the story so far...sure is lucky (for DB!) that he had that sword.

How did DB happen to come into possession of that sword? That might be a tale worth telling as well. Did a mob drop it? Long nights in dusty libraries? Merchants bribed? Throats cut?

It might be interesting to weave some of those details into future chapters.

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the divine slayer took up nightchill life force to feed its self

So it has a 'self', does it have a will of its own? What happens if its will conflicts with DB's?

And of course, Torin's burning question:

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will the continude have nekkids in it?

Dark_Barbarian · 04-20-2010, 06:58 PM

Chapter 4 The Great Apocalypse

Dark Barbarian has conqerd the syrtis warzone now he presses on to the syrtis gate. Wyatt the leader of the Dark Legion and one of DB's Friends regroups on the road and mass his army in the woods, DB had a feeling like hes being watched.

he strays away from camp and goes deeper into the forest out of no where Biwie appeard and said "Dark Barbarian you will leave this sacred place at first light". then Biwie walk into the mist Dark Barbarian drew hes throw axe and throws it at him but he was gone before it hit him like he was a ghost or something.

when day light came Dark Barbarian and wyatt made their way to the syrtis gate. Nel one of Nightchills loyal friends was there DB said "surrender now ill spare you and your lands refuse and ill turn syrtis into a waste land of fire and ash". Nel refused her his offer and made a different one "DB we have a different offer come to our arena and battle our most powerful hunter if you win you can take the syrtis land if you lose we take all your forts and your castle".

DB completely froze of how overwhelming it is on that offer. DB said "you have a deal ill fight your most powerful hunter". nel said "good leave your army here at the gate bring any weapon you desire". DB chose the divine slayer he made his way to the arena, the crowd boo and insulted and abuse DB but he ignored their stupidity.

the crowd silenced and Nel was on the top platform nel said "here we have Dark Barbarian Prince of ignis and over their we have Biwie the master of the bow and lord of the Forests". the crowd cheered biwie on DB drew his sword out, Biwie pulled his bow back and then the battle was on.

Dark Barbarian charged like a herd of rhinos charging. he jumped up and his sword smashed the ground where biwie was at. biwie moved like a humming bird and dodged DBs powerful attack. DB looks behind and he had has 2 arrows in his back he pulled them out and endured the pain.

Biwie jumped into the sun DB looked up and over 20 arrows rained down on him biwie jumped down like a feather. DBs rage grew and grew he smashed the arena floor with his sword the arena was coved in fire and ash like when a volcano cools after it erupts.

DB once again charged like a herd of rhinos biwie got SO detracted by this volcanic area. DB jumped into the air and smashed biwie with his most powerful strike. biwie was like 20 feet into the ground every bone in his body was crushed. DB calls his army to attack the syrtis gate. nel fled but DB knows she will be back. DB has conqerd the syrtis lands.

next is Aggersborg Strike.

to be Continued

Dark_Barbarian · 04-20-2010, 07:05 PM

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Originally Posted by j4np0l

...but before that, he threatened to commit suicide several times because the gods didn`t want to give him the sword:

http://www.regnumonline.com.ar/forum...ad.php?t=59777

dude he gets all the daen rha stuff in chapter 1 you need to go back and read in the thread named horus stories

j4np0l · 04-20-2010, 07:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Dark_Barbarian

dude he gets all the daen rha stuff in chapter 1 you need to go back and read in the thread named horus stories

And you need to understand a joke

In the other thread (Link here) your said you were going to leave the game because you couldn't get an epic sword....the part of your story that mentions the "Divine slayer sword" reminded me of that other thread....

UmarilsStillHere · 04-20-2010, 07:23 PM

Are you going to pay to fix that hole in the arena floor? Because I sure as hell aint.

Mattdoesrock · 04-20-2010, 07:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Dark_Barbarian

if you win you can take the syrtis land if you lose we take all your forts and your castle".

Gytha_Ogg · 04-20-2010, 07:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Dark_Barbarian

next is Aggersborg Strike.

Uh oh.

Shoulda seen that coming.

I think we'll win, though!

04-20-2010, 06:58 PM	#15
Dark_Barbarian Initiate Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Delaware USA Posts: 211	Chapter 4 The Great Apocalypse Dark Barbarian has conqerd the syrtis warzone now he presses on to the syrtis gate. Wyatt the leader of the Dark Legion and one of DB's Friends regroups on the road and mass his army in the woods, DB had a feeling like hes being watched. he strays away from camp and goes deeper into the forest out of no where Biwie appeard and said "Dark Barbarian you will leave this sacred place at first light". then Biwie walk into the mist Dark Barbarian drew hes throw axe and throws it at him but he was gone before it hit him like he was a ghost or something. when day light came Dark Barbarian and wyatt made their way to the syrtis gate. Nel one of Nightchills loyal friends was there DB said "surrender now ill spare you and your lands refuse and ill turn syrtis into a waste land of fire and ash". Nel refused her his offer and made a different one "DB we have a different offer come to our arena and battle our most powerful hunter if you win you can take the syrtis land if you lose we take all your forts and your castle". DB completely froze of how overwhelming it is on that offer. DB said "you have a deal ill fight your most powerful hunter". nel said "good leave your army here at the gate bring any weapon you desire". DB chose the divine slayer he made his way to the arena, the crowd boo and insulted and abuse DB but he ignored their stupidity. the crowd silenced and Nel was on the top platform nel said "here we have Dark Barbarian Prince of ignis and over their we have Biwie the master of the bow and lord of the Forests". the crowd cheered biwie on DB drew his sword out, Biwie pulled his bow back and then the battle was on. Dark Barbarian charged like a herd of rhinos charging. he jumped up and his sword smashed the ground where biwie was at. biwie moved like a humming bird and dodged DBs powerful attack. DB looks behind and he had has 2 arrows in his back he pulled them out and endured the pain. Biwie jumped into the sun DB looked up and over 20 arrows rained down on him biwie jumped down like a feather. DBs rage grew and grew he smashed the arena floor with his sword the arena was coved in fire and ash like when a volcano cools after it erupts. DB once again charged like a herd of rhinos biwie got SO detracted by this volcanic area. DB jumped into the air and smashed biwie with his most powerful strike. biwie was like 20 feet into the ground every bone in his body was crushed. DB calls his army to attack the syrtis gate. nel fled but DB knows she will be back. DB has conqerd the syrtis lands. next is Aggersborg Strike. to be Continued Last edited by Dark_Barbarian; 04-21-2010 at 06:58 PM.

04-20-2010, 07:23 PM	#18
UmarilsStillHere Marquis Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: England Posts: 2,419	Are you going to pay to fix that hole in the arena floor? Because I sure as hell aint. __________________ Faith 50 Barb Faithless 50 Lock Umaril 45 Conju Kailas 45 Marks Pel 45 Knight I N Q U I S I T I O N