Horus stories - Page 3

UmarilsStillHere · 01-19-2010, 08:08 PM

Faith watched this spectacle fell over laughing and died.

You should totaly make your own thread for these

NotScias · 01-19-2010, 08:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Dark_Barbarian

Next is the battle for Eferias castle

Oh noes !! WE'R GONNA BE INFADED !

linearguild · 01-19-2010, 11:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Dark_Barbarian

Batlin cast spike field and half the syrtis army was killed. Batlin cast a more powerful spell it was a huge meteor and it detroyed the whole syrtis army takeing Isemon with it.

Batlin == Evendim?

/me ponders.

Immune · 01-20-2010, 01:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Dark_Barbarian

herberd
dieing
Servived
stoped
conjuerer
no where
takeing

Must... restrain... spellcheck reflexes... (Notice I didn't include grammar... like "the rain of arrow") Also, WTF conjurers have "arrow cloud" spells? I wants it!!!

Kyrottimus · 01-20-2010, 08:32 AM

Easy fellas, DB is contributing to "HORUS STORIES" and doing darn good job

The storyline of the Original Poster still obviously holds its integrity just fine...

Keep it up Dark Barbarian, I can't wait to see how the battle at Eferias turns out

Flightcap · 01-20-2010, 06:16 PM

Ty to whichever mod (I assume it was a mod?) moved all these around. Now we can enjoy all the stories without confusion.

Torin_Ironfist · 01-21-2010, 01:13 AM

Why did the mod seperate 1 of the stories from the other 2. There should be a new topic for each(Grain's and DB's and Gawyn's?) or all in 1 topic...

Altara · 01-21-2010, 11:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Torin_Ironfist

Why did the mod seperate 1 of the stories from the other 2. There should be a new topic for each(Grain's and DB's and Gawyn's?) or all in 1 topic...

I would have to agree, OTHER horus stories sounds abit demeaning as if Gawyns stories are better then these and are the horus stories

bois · 01-21-2010, 12:44 PM

Sorry DB I could not read through it all. The whole block is an irritating mass of white for me (not the storyline).

Try to break your paragraphs into blocks with spaces like I did here. One thought per paragraph . The readability is poor.
The story may be good but I simply will not get a headache trying to read through the one compacted mass. Sorry mate.

I will read your next instalment providing the readability improves.

Regards
Artec

Dannboy · 01-21-2010, 02:05 PM

I'm lovin' it.

01-19-2010, 08:08 PM	#21
UmarilsStillHere Marquis Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: England Posts: 2,419	Faith watched this spectacle fell over laughing and died. You should totaly make your own thread for these __________________ Faith 50 Barb Faithless 50 Lock Umaril 45 Conju Kailas 45 Marks Pel 45 Knight I N Q U I S I T I O N

01-20-2010, 08:32 AM	#25
Kyrottimus Baron Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Montana, U.S.A. Posts: 690	Easy fellas, DB is contributing to "HORUS STORIES" and doing darn good job The storyline of the Original Poster still obviously holds its integrity just fine... Keep it up Dark Barbarian, I can't wait to see how the battle at Eferias turns out __________________ Μολὼν λαβέ Kyrottimus: 60 - Barbarian (WM) RIP \|\| Rykor: 60 - Knight (WM) RIP Vanosen Sagesight: 60 - Marksman (WM) RIP \|\| Orykus: 60 - Hunter RIP

01-20-2010, 06:16 PM	#26
Flightcap Apprentice Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Iowa, USA Posts: 81	Ty to whichever mod (I assume it was a mod?) moved all these around. Now we can enjoy all the stories without confusion. __________________ Fight for the right! ~~Reclamation of Horus~~ Flightcap - Syrtis 45 conjurer

01-21-2010, 02:05 PM	#30
Dannboy Initiate Join Date: May 2008 Location: With DB on the top of Mount Doom were Sauron lives. Posts: 206	DB's Stories I'm lovin' it. __________________ Dannboy, Horus Knight lv 50 Ignis After two years The Cake Is A Lie _But there's no sense crying over every mistake. We just keep on trying till we run out of cake.

01-21-2010, 01:13 AM	#27
Torin_Ironfist Secondary account Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Hubert H. Humphrey Metrodome Posts: 212	Why did the mod seperate 1 of the stories from the other 2. There should be a new topic for each(Grain's and DB's and Gawyn's?) or all in 1 topic...

01-21-2010, 12:44 PM	#29
bois Count Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Trinidad and Tobago Posts: 1,194	Sorry DB I could not read through it all. The whole block is an irritating mass of white for me (not the storyline). Try to break your paragraphs into blocks with spaces like I did here. One thought per paragraph . The readability is poor. The story may be good but I simply will not get a headache trying to read through the one compacted mass. Sorry mate. I will read your next instalment providing the readability improves. Regards Artec