Comic!!! - Page 644

kraetyz · 09-28-2008, 07:47 PM

You. Do not. Like. Fantasy?

How DARE you?

Torg_Snowflake · 09-28-2008, 08:36 PM

Then lay down, close your eyes and let your imagination create that industrial place you want. You'll mind will start popping characters by itself

Pizdzius · 09-28-2008, 08:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tomastomas

Then lay down, close your eyes and let your imagination create that industrial place you want. You'll mind will start popping characters by itself

I do that 24/7

I still get no story

ArcticWolf · 09-28-2008, 10:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aardvak2669

I do that 24/7

I still get no story

What about a guy with almost no money working in the industrial area of an old and big, polluted and gray city? He could get involved with the mafia to earn some bucks. You know the rest.

Snoid · 09-28-2008, 11:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Xephandor

What about a guy with almost no money working in the industrial area of an old and big, polluted and gray city? He could get involved with the mafia to earn some bucks. You know the rest.

And some vampires...

Torg_Snowflake · 09-28-2008, 11:21 PM

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Originally Posted by Snoid

And some vampires...

No vampires. Just a poor guy thiking "why am I living...?" as he crawls every morning out of bed to do the same crappy job for a low salary that barely allows him to eat. The only thing keeping him from suicide it's instinct... but there's a point where desesperation and madness take over.

Pizdzius · 09-28-2008, 11:50 PM

And the twist in the plot? Dialogues? Special events? As far as you guys made it it's not further than I did

I have a bunch of scripts I made when I was younger, but I don't see any future in them. Like machine dogs taking over humanity or about a gang of graffiti artists who get involved in political war over a city.
I do, I do have a lot of "oh maybe this? or this?" but there's no details, no evolution

ArcticWolf · 09-29-2008, 12:30 AM

Maybe you don't need a single storyline, maybe you need a whole set of side-stories linked by the choices of the characters. Imagine a group of people who live in a city and have their own lives, but they're somewhat connected (even if they don't know each other).

A poor kid that works in a factory and gets payed by the "lead" mafia to sabotage all the weaponry production line after some failed negotiations. The kid lives with his parents, who hate him because he "brought bad luck" to the family (he was born by accident).

The "lead"* mafia pays him a "lot" of money (enough to live for some years). The factory where he used to work closes, so our next character is introduced. He's a middle aged merchant who used to sell weapons to the mercenaries during the last civil war twenty years ago. He's now looking for job and gets hired by an anarchist baker with delusions of grandeur (he wants to free the city and kill the governor).

I can't think about every story now... Tell me if you like it or if it's crap (be sincere, please

).

phoenix_jackson · 09-29-2008, 12:53 AM

You were born imaginative and had great creations from the start. As you've said: maybe this or this or this and it never ends.

Perhaps you could also make some very short comics. Like 5 pages or so. Atleast you get to finish some. Nothing in depth. Just a little tour on your mind.

Pizdzius · 09-29-2008, 09:16 AM

5 page story comic is nothing. I wouldn't show anything with it. I had to make 15 picture storyboard for Film Academy exam and I felt like it's hell

Xeph, thanks man, that's really creative! Although I am a kind of a person who likes to reflect everything as real as possible and I know shit about weapon smuggling. I mean, not even from newspapers. Probably people who know would laugh at my attempts :S

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09-28-2008, 08:36 PM	#6432
Torg_Snowflake Initiate Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Lomas de Zamora Posts: 243	Then lay down, close your eyes and let your imagination create that industrial place you want. You'll mind will start popping characters by itself __________________ Torg Snowflake Brujo Pirómano de Alsius, Vagallero Cornflakes y Consejero de La Jihad

09-28-2008, 11:50 PM	#6437
Pizdzius Baron Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Polish Side of RA Posts: 779	And the twist in the plot? Dialogues? Special events? As far as you guys made it it's not further than I did I have a bunch of scripts I made when I was younger, but I don't see any future in them. Like machine dogs taking over humanity or about a gang of graffiti artists who get involved in political war over a city. I do, I do have a lot of "oh maybe this? or this?" but there's no details, no evolution __________________ Pizdzius Swedzioszek Leader of CBA Regnum Comic <- my Regnum Comic , RSS version -> RSS (if you wish to contact me on my other realm character: Ignis - Josephine)

09-29-2008, 12:30 AM	#6438
ArcticWolf Duke Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: 0x00CAFE Posts: 3,366	Maybe you don't need a single storyline, maybe you need a whole set of side-stories linked by the choices of the characters. Imagine a group of people who live in a city and have their own lives, but they're somewhat connected (even if they don't know each other). A poor kid that works in a factory and gets payed by the "lead" mafia to sabotage all the weaponry production line after some failed negotiations. The kid lives with his parents, who hate him because he "brought bad luck" to the family (he was born by accident). The "lead"* mafia pays him a "lot" of money (enough to live for some years). The factory where he used to work closes, so our next character is introduced. He's a middle aged merchant who used to sell weapons to the mercenaries during the last civil war twenty years ago. He's now looking for job and gets hired by an anarchist baker with delusions of grandeur (he wants to free the city and kill the governor). I can't think about every story now... Tell me if you like it or if it's crap (be sincere, please ). __________________ I don't have a solution, but I admire the problem.

09-29-2008, 12:53 AM	#6439
phoenix_jackson Initiate Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: South Korea Posts: 150	You were born imaginative and had great creations from the start. As you've said: maybe this or this or this and it never ends. Perhaps you could also make some very short comics. Like 5 pages or so. Atleast you get to finish some. Nothing in depth. Just a little tour on your mind. __________________ ONETTE Warlock of Syrtis Herbred Knight of The White Company

09-28-2008, 07:47 PM	#6431
kraetyz Banned Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: The unforgiving darkness that is Sweden Posts: 109	You. Do not. Like. Fantasy? How DARE you?

09-29-2008, 09:16 AM	#6440
Pizdzius Baron Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Polish Side of RA Posts: 779	5 page story comic is nothing. I wouldn't show anything with it. I had to make 15 picture storyboard for Film Academy exam and I felt like it's hell Xeph, thanks man, that's really creative! Although I am a kind of a person who likes to reflect everything as real as possible and I know shit about weapon smuggling. I mean, not even from newspapers. Probably people who know would laugh at my attempts :S __________________ Pizdzius Swedzioszek Leader of CBA Regnum Comic <- my Regnum Comic , RSS version -> RSS (if you wish to contact me on my other realm character: Ignis - Josephine)