Gawyn's Horus stories - Page 9

survive · 09-24-2009, 09:33 PM

great addition again .. keep it up

and i am not sure that you are not watching our general chat in the wz... you really are kinda nailing the characters...

and hey Kyro long time no see, wb... again.. and your clan chat is kinda that way in general in the wz too K

either way... keep the great stories coming

UmarilsStillHere · 09-25-2009, 03:49 PM

Hes a spy!!

Gawyn_Trakkand · 09-25-2009, 04:26 PM

>.< sorry guys. i promise that the new story will be up today i've just been staring at word and ended up writing 'he spilt my drink' 10,000 times. Basically i have written the third part 8 times now and i am now starting from scratch, blame kyro :P

Kyrottimus · 09-25-2009, 08:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gawyn_Trakkand

Basically i have written the third part 8 times now and i am now starting from scratch, blame kyro :P

*Kyrottimus shaves his face with plastic silverware as penance for his misconduct*

I was just bein' a smartass! I meant nothin' by it!! I can haz to aporogize!

...sowwie...

Mbwana · 09-25-2009, 09:57 PM

lol, I REALLY like these stories!

great job

Threno · 09-26-2009, 08:20 PM

Just a quick update here.

Gawyn has the next story ready, but sadly his net is out atm, so he can't upload it

P.S. If anyone works for orange tech support and wants to help out, drop me a pm

_Enio_ · 09-27-2009, 02:44 AM

aww shit, im checkin in here 5 times evry day XD
*me shoots some fixing arrows into some orange tree*

Gawyn_Trakkand · 09-28-2009, 09:59 AM

Hey guys sorry about not posting but Orange (my ISP) is really yanking my chain and it may be sorted today but could possibly take 2 days more

will keep you all updated but the good news is the next two stories are written and ready to be posted unfortunatly my local Library doesnt allow me to spend hours here typing them out

Gawyn_Trakkand · 09-28-2009, 11:53 AM

Sorry for double posting but ALL IS FIXED hope you enjoy the new story ^^

Klutu gripped his sword firmly knuckles whitening, Training wasn't quite like this in Syrtis, there they just beat on poor creatures and where then considered great warriors. The two barbarians faced each other in the snowy field, wind blowing hard against both their flanks neither losing any balance. Arcan watched with Enio and Compost, Arcan looked towards the other two.
'10k gold says stump foot gets t-bagged.'
Enio and Compost looked at each other then at Klutu then back to Arcan
'sorry Arcan i'm not the eager to split with the gold ive got.'
All three laughed and watched the fight.

Klutu heard their laughter, he wasn't put off by it he was encouraged more to fight and win. His sword matching his opponents they met with loud cracks in the cool air. As they grated off each other the sparks flew dancing on the snow slightly before dying. The barbarians danced their deadly dance, neither holding back but neither wounded yet, their skill with the sword accounted for that. They danced circles around each other their blades flourishing deadly yet beautiful their dance in the sno....
'fuck that i'm done A i'm too lazy to kill you and B the narration is getting a bit gay and flowery'
...er sorry i was jus.....
'no one cares about how pretty and deadly our fighting is they wanna know if Klutu spills my guts'
...err....ok. The opponent barbarian exhausted from the fight held up his hands and sheathed his blade bowing to Klutu.
'You fight pretty good for a short stack and i'm shattered so congratulations I Kyrottimus welcome you in the Alsrian Legion. Once you are ready we go to war.'
Klutu took the time to have a little celebration and a dance. Kyrottimus walked over to Arcan, Compost and Enio. Arcan broke in before anyone had a chance to talk
'You got your ass kicked by the new guy!'
Compost and Enio looked at each other
'should have taken the bet.'
Kyrottimus shrugged and lent against the wall
'He is a good fighter and i didn't want to mess up my hair thus i let him win. Look the kids happy see he's dancing.'
Arcan saw this and took advantage.
'What kinda shit assed dancing is that Stumpy? All your doing is walking back and forward pointing a bit waving your arms and looking over your shoulder. You look like a retard'
Klutu smiled and shouted back
'Thats the nicest thing you have ever said to me i only 'look like a retard.'
The others laughed including Klutu and Arcan turned and walked away.

Yenro was walking through the Alsian forests, Shadows where thick and it was getting dark he was on the track of a female warrior. The tracks weren't big enough for Alturian or Molok so that left Dark elf, skellics, or half elf. Yenro walked on keeping an eye out for tell tail signs of the path they took cautiously he followed. Something caught his eye he bent down to have a look, a different shaped leaf in a pine forest it belonged to a Syrtian tree. He got up and looked around, there was nothing no trail no broken twigs no footprints in the snow, Yenro became uneasy. A couple of seconds later, the Snow behind him errupted a small warrior female stood there. In an instant Yenro turned but was too slow to do anything. She brought her enormous hammer down into his kneecap inverting it. Yenro let out a shriek of pain and crumpled to the floor. The woman stood on his shoulder pinning him to the floor hammer raised above her head she looked at Yenro with cold unmerciful eyes.
'Where is Slayer of Light.'
Yenro looked at her those eyes taking him in, the fury, cold fury behind them.
'I dont know of any Slayer of Light'
She brought the hammer down smashing it into his shoulder immediatly his shoulder and collar bone crunched and Yenro made another piercing shreik of pain. He spoke once more.
'Even if i did know i wouldn't tell you your gonna kill me anyway.'
The woman stared at him and said nothing. The last thing Yenro saw was the hammer coming down into his face. Yenro was no more.

Klutu was dressed and ready for battle his armor gleamed, his newly forged sword almost a duplicate of the Satarco he once carried. Klutu walked on with the group as they marched toward Aggersborg fort, Ignis had temporarily taken the fort and the Alsian Legion was answering the call to war. They needed to know numbers of what they where dealing with, as if he had heard Klutu's thought Immune the blue appeared next to them
'4 warriors 5 archers and 5 mages a tough crowd to beat by the looks too.'
The hunter vanished as suddenly as he had appeared. They stood in front of Aggersborg fort wall now they could see their Archers lined on the wall.
Arcan was humming to himself as he walked forward he came forward with two other warlocks Renyo and Fcelka Drson. Arcan started singing.
'5 red iggies standing on the wall, 5 red iggies standing on the wall and if 3 hardcore locks where to.....'
Lighting, fire and ice erupted from the mages staffs, followed by volleys from Immune, Enio and Compost they soon cut through the archers you could hear some harsh sounds coming from the wall and then the attack stopped and Arcan continued singing
'there'd be no red iggies and no fucking wall'
Compost spoke up
'we got 4 of them Latem and Orion Ignitas where killed in the first sultar and by myself and Enio not sure about Ignitas actually he seemed to trip and fall off the wall. The second sultar weakend the other 3 and the last sultar killed Greenbolt and Tresta, Clings escaped'
Enio tapped Compost
'Heads up their warriors are coming'
Klutu unsheathed his sword at last ready for a fight

Fighting Irish, Drylock, Llayne and Pakos charged for them followed closely by Orimae fionn, Plunder, Surfacing, Anthor and Naomii. Arcan looked at the on coming horde.
'We're screwed.'
Klutu gripped on to his sword tighter like it was a support to stop his legs carrying him in the opposite direction. He stared down at the oncoming army until his gaze was broke by the strangest thing he has ever seen the mages at the back 3 of them had been hit by something and where soaring through the air Anthor actually flew over their heads. A young barbarian dwarf by the name of Rumple Foreskin saw the opportunity of confusion and went for the attack unfortunatly Pakos saw this and knocked him off his feet the other ignis warriors drove their weapons through him an instant later. The shellshock had stopped for Klutu and Kyrottimus they charged in the others quick on their heals Kyrottimus looked over his shoulder and shouted to a couple of knights behind them.
'Ultimate you take Pakos, Lust on Llayne i'll take Irish Klutu you take Drylock.'

The battle went by as it seemed in slow motion Drylock made a mistake early on and misbalanced himself Klutu took the advantage and moved to the side slashing as he went Drylocks innards spilt to the floor just as an arrow flew past Klutu and into the head of Plunder.
'Thanks Enio'
Enio winked back at Klutu and turned to aquire a new target. an arrow smacked straight into the side of Enio's neck he put his arm up to the wound and clutched at it blood already forming at his mouth Klutu looked around to see a smiling badly burnt Clings.
'You idiots forgot about me!'
Klutu withdrew his sword and threw it at the marksman his smile wiped off his face replaced by shock at the enormous sword petruding from his chest. A thunder crack sound and Ultimate was sent back into Klutu knocking the wind out of him. He looked around he could see Renyo clutching a wound a nasty burn possibly given to him by Plunder. Arcan was standing just with the support of his staff he was exhausted and one of his horns had the top half missing. Kyrottimus was clutching a wound to his chest a nasty slash in a diagonal across his breastplate Fighting Irish was armless and missing a leg rushing at kyrottimus.
'oh geez, seriously what you gonna do bleed on me'
Kyrottimus deftly swung his sword cutting Fighting Irish in half vertically.
The battle against the Ignis insurgents was won but not without casualtys. Arcans horn was damaged, Fcelka Drson had lost a glove and worst of all Kyrottimus' hair was slightly asque oh crap forgot about Enio yeah he was dying too that was almost as bad.
Klutu turned to see Enio twitching Compost trying to mask the wound with something Lust shouting for a Conjurer again the slow motion shellshock had kicked in until the form of Kyrottimus flew over Klutus shoulder and landed in a heap behind Enio
Compost got up and roared
'What the FUCK! now!!?'

There stood the a small woman with a huge hammer
'Hello SoL'

Compost looked at Klutu and Klutu gulped
'Who is she Klutu'
Klutu shook his head and sighed
'It's Faith'

UmarilsStillHere · 09-28-2009, 12:50 PM

Great

I guessed the Sol/Faith rivalry would show up at some point, what was it about 200 fights in the arena?

Sorry Yerno

09-24-2009, 09:33 PM	#81
survive Apprentice Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Louisiana Posts: 75	great addition again .. keep it up and i am not sure that you are not watching our general chat in the wz... you really are kinda nailing the characters... and hey Kyro long time no see, wb... again.. and your clan chat is kinda that way in general in the wz too K either way... keep the great stories coming __________________ Gringo de Magnifico - RA \| Rumple Foreskin - Horus/Raven - Pack of Bastards -

09-25-2009, 03:49 PM	#82
UmarilsStillHere Marquis Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: England Posts: 2,419	Hes a spy!! __________________ Faith 50 Barb Faithless 50 Lock Umaril 45 Conju Kailas 45 Marks Pel 45 Knight I N Q U I S I T I O N

09-25-2009, 09:57 PM	#85
Mbwana Initiate Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: No longer South Korea, dammit Posts: 156	lol, I REALLY like these stories! great job __________________ \o\ M'bwana - Mbwana - Embwana (Ra) /o/ ~ PERL ~

09-26-2009, 08:20 PM	#86
Threno Pledge Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Zummerzet Posts: 7	Just a quick update here. Gawyn has the next story ready, but sadly his net is out atm, so he can't upload it P.S. If anyone works for orange tech support and wants to help out, drop me a pm __________________ Hax0red by Kaelee.

09-27-2009, 02:44 AM	#87
_Enio_ Marquis Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Germany Posts: 1,843	aww shit, im checkin in here 5 times evry day XD me shoots some fixing arrows into some orange tree __________________ Fix the Marksman subclass: Suggestion

09-25-2009, 04:26 PM	#83
Gawyn_Trakkand Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cheshire, England Posts: 219	>.< sorry guys. i promise that the new story will be up today i've just been staring at word and ended up writing 'he spilt my drink' 10,000 times. Basically i have written the third part 8 times now and i am now starting from scratch, blame kyro :P

09-28-2009, 09:59 AM	#88
Gawyn_Trakkand Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cheshire, England Posts: 219	Hey guys sorry about not posting but Orange (my ISP) is really yanking my chain and it may be sorted today but could possibly take 2 days more will keep you all updated but the good news is the next two stories are written and ready to be posted unfortunatly my local Library doesnt allow me to spend hours here typing them out

09-28-2009, 11:53 AM	#89
Gawyn_Trakkand Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Cheshire, England Posts: 219	Sorry for double posting but ALL IS FIXED hope you enjoy the new story ^^ Klutu gripped his sword firmly knuckles whitening, Training wasn't quite like this in Syrtis, there they just beat on poor creatures and where then considered great warriors. The two barbarians faced each other in the snowy field, wind blowing hard against both their flanks neither losing any balance. Arcan watched with Enio and Compost, Arcan looked towards the other two. '10k gold says stump foot gets t-bagged.' Enio and Compost looked at each other then at Klutu then back to Arcan 'sorry Arcan i'm not the eager to split with the gold ive got.' All three laughed and watched the fight. Klutu heard their laughter, he wasn't put off by it he was encouraged more to fight and win. His sword matching his opponents they met with loud cracks in the cool air. As they grated off each other the sparks flew dancing on the snow slightly before dying. The barbarians danced their deadly dance, neither holding back but neither wounded yet, their skill with the sword accounted for that. They danced circles around each other their blades flourishing deadly yet beautiful their dance in the sno.... 'fuck that i'm done A i'm too lazy to kill you and B the narration is getting a bit gay and flowery' ...er sorry i was jus..... 'no one cares about how pretty and deadly our fighting is they wanna know if Klutu spills my guts' ...err....ok. The opponent barbarian exhausted from the fight held up his hands and sheathed his blade bowing to Klutu. 'You fight pretty good for a short stack and i'm shattered so congratulations I Kyrottimus welcome you in the Alsrian Legion. Once you are ready we go to war.' Klutu took the time to have a little celebration and a dance. Kyrottimus walked over to Arcan, Compost and Enio. Arcan broke in before anyone had a chance to talk 'You got your ass kicked by the new guy!' Compost and Enio looked at each other 'should have taken the bet.' Kyrottimus shrugged and lent against the wall 'He is a good fighter and i didn't want to mess up my hair thus i let him win. Look the kids happy see he's dancing.' Arcan saw this and took advantage. 'What kinda shit assed dancing is that Stumpy? All your doing is walking back and forward pointing a bit waving your arms and looking over your shoulder. You look like a retard' Klutu smiled and shouted back 'Thats the nicest thing you have ever said to me i only 'look like a retard.' The others laughed including Klutu and Arcan turned and walked away. Yenro was walking through the Alsian forests, Shadows where thick and it was getting dark he was on the track of a female warrior. The tracks weren't big enough for Alturian or Molok so that left Dark elf, skellics, or half elf. Yenro walked on keeping an eye out for tell tail signs of the path they took cautiously he followed. Something caught his eye he bent down to have a look, a different shaped leaf in a pine forest it belonged to a Syrtian tree. He got up and looked around, there was nothing no trail no broken twigs no footprints in the snow, Yenro became uneasy. A couple of seconds later, the Snow behind him errupted a small warrior female stood there. In an instant Yenro turned but was too slow to do anything. She brought her enormous hammer down into his kneecap inverting it. Yenro let out a shriek of pain and crumpled to the floor. The woman stood on his shoulder pinning him to the floor hammer raised above her head she looked at Yenro with cold unmerciful eyes. 'Where is Slayer of Light.' Yenro looked at her those eyes taking him in, the fury, cold fury behind them. 'I dont know of any Slayer of Light' She brought the hammer down smashing it into his shoulder immediatly his shoulder and collar bone crunched and Yenro made another piercing shreik of pain. He spoke once more. 'Even if i did know i wouldn't tell you your gonna kill me anyway.' The woman stared at him and said nothing. The last thing Yenro saw was the hammer coming down into his face. Yenro was no more. Klutu was dressed and ready for battle his armor gleamed, his newly forged sword almost a duplicate of the Satarco he once carried. Klutu walked on with the group as they marched toward Aggersborg fort, Ignis had temporarily taken the fort and the Alsian Legion was answering the call to war. They needed to know numbers of what they where dealing with, as if he had heard Klutu's thought Immune the blue appeared next to them '4 warriors 5 archers and 5 mages a tough crowd to beat by the looks too.' The hunter vanished as suddenly as he had appeared. They stood in front of Aggersborg fort wall now they could see their Archers lined on the wall. Arcan was humming to himself as he walked forward he came forward with two other warlocks Renyo and Fcelka Drson. Arcan started singing. '5 red iggies standing on the wall, 5 red iggies standing on the wall and if 3 hardcore locks where to.....' Lighting, fire and ice erupted from the mages staffs, followed by volleys from Immune, Enio and Compost they soon cut through the archers you could hear some harsh sounds coming from the wall and then the attack stopped and Arcan continued singing 'there'd be no red iggies and no fucking wall' Compost spoke up 'we got 4 of them Latem and Orion Ignitas where killed in the first sultar and by myself and Enio not sure about Ignitas actually he seemed to trip and fall off the wall. The second sultar weakend the other 3 and the last sultar killed Greenbolt and Tresta, Clings escaped' Enio tapped Compost 'Heads up their warriors are coming' Klutu unsheathed his sword at last ready for a fight Fighting Irish, Drylock, Llayne and Pakos charged for them followed closely by Orimae fionn, Plunder, Surfacing, Anthor and Naomii. Arcan looked at the on coming horde. 'We're screwed.' Klutu gripped on to his sword tighter like it was a support to stop his legs carrying him in the opposite direction. He stared down at the oncoming army until his gaze was broke by the strangest thing he has ever seen the mages at the back 3 of them had been hit by something and where soaring through the air Anthor actually flew over their heads. A young barbarian dwarf by the name of Rumple Foreskin saw the opportunity of confusion and went for the attack unfortunatly Pakos saw this and knocked him off his feet the other ignis warriors drove their weapons through him an instant later. The shellshock had stopped for Klutu and Kyrottimus they charged in the others quick on their heals Kyrottimus looked over his shoulder and shouted to a couple of knights behind them. 'Ultimate you take Pakos, Lust on Llayne i'll take Irish Klutu you take Drylock.' The battle went by as it seemed in slow motion Drylock made a mistake early on and misbalanced himself Klutu took the advantage and moved to the side slashing as he went Drylocks innards spilt to the floor just as an arrow flew past Klutu and into the head of Plunder. 'Thanks Enio' Enio winked back at Klutu and turned to aquire a new target. an arrow smacked straight into the side of Enio's neck he put his arm up to the wound and clutched at it blood already forming at his mouth Klutu looked around to see a smiling badly burnt Clings. 'You idiots forgot about me!' Klutu withdrew his sword and threw it at the marksman his smile wiped off his face replaced by shock at the enormous sword petruding from his chest. A thunder crack sound and Ultimate was sent back into Klutu knocking the wind out of him. He looked around he could see Renyo clutching a wound a nasty burn possibly given to him by Plunder. Arcan was standing just with the support of his staff he was exhausted and one of his horns had the top half missing. Kyrottimus was clutching a wound to his chest a nasty slash in a diagonal across his breastplate Fighting Irish was armless and missing a leg rushing at kyrottimus. 'oh geez, seriously what you gonna do bleed on me' Kyrottimus deftly swung his sword cutting Fighting Irish in half vertically. The battle against the Ignis insurgents was won but not without casualtys. Arcans horn was damaged, Fcelka Drson had lost a glove and worst of all Kyrottimus' hair was slightly asque oh crap forgot about Enio yeah he was dying too that was almost as bad. Klutu turned to see Enio twitching Compost trying to mask the wound with something Lust shouting for a Conjurer again the slow motion shellshock had kicked in until the form of Kyrottimus flew over Klutus shoulder and landed in a heap behind Enio Compost got up and roared 'What the FUCK! now!!?' There stood the a small woman with a huge hammer 'Hello SoL' Compost looked at Klutu and Klutu gulped 'Who is she Klutu' Klutu shook his head and sighed 'It's Faith' Last edited by Gawyn_Trakkand; 09-28-2009 at 01:31 PM.

09-28-2009, 12:50 PM	#90
UmarilsStillHere Marquis Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: England Posts: 2,419	Great I guessed the Sol/Faith rivalry would show up at some point, what was it about 200 fights in the arena? Sorry Yerno __________________ Faith 50 Barb Faithless 50 Lock Umaril 45 Conju Kailas 45 Marks Pel 45 Knight I N Q U I S I T I O N Last edited by Umaril; 09-28-2009 at 01:52 PM.