Another Horus Story

Devkarven · 03-29-2010, 07:13 AM

this would be a really great fictional story if we could like add something with us running into a alsuis zerg ten foot from the syrtis gate and a even bigger syrtis zerg behind them not attacking them. man i love this story you should write fictional comics

keep up the good work.

JennyfromtheBlock · 03-29-2010, 09:45 AM

Fabulous story

I <3 Fiction...

NotScias · 03-29-2010, 03:53 PM

Hehe, nice story even if it's nothing else than the Great Organized Ignis Army invading the Huge Unorganized Syrtian Zerg, but even I like it

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Scias trotted along mounted on his infamous white steed

veluchami · 03-29-2010, 06:08 PM

I wonder how you come up with plots for your 'fictional' stories

Again, nicely written, Van. My best part is 'ignis marksmen making pincusion out of the syrtis' lol.

bois · 03-29-2010, 06:26 PM

Nicely written. You certainly have a knack for fiction writing. So good it could almost be something that happened...

I enjoy these stories.

Artec

WhateverUSMC · 03-30-2010, 12:53 AM

Sorry I'm late on this, but this gem....

a long long time ago in a galexy farr far
awaw
away
a virgen was once to be found
his name was JOHN
lost with out any knowledge he knew not what was up
he never knew a woman with in his heart or love with in his soul
herb is getting attacked now
so upon his life with in his prayers he found JANE the only friend he could ever kno
that day upon his happiness the only smile he could share was his last
THEY FOUND A LONELY MAN TRYING TO EXCApe the closet DEAD UPON THE FLOOR
WITH IN HIS THE WORDS LIES DIED WITH A SMILE
sry people i am going to get killd here
tell me where u r
cum by yah my...
as they raised his head thinking it was a true warior named john they found out it was u reading this that was truly cumming out the closet was no more
i want another lezbien lover there great

...made up for this whole crappy month.

Thanks, and keep on posting!

VandaMan · 04-02-2010, 04:03 PM

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Originally Posted by WhateverUSMC

Sorry I'm late on this, but this gem....

[...]

...made up for this whole crappy month.

Thanks, and keep on posting!

Yeah, that one was epic, I love wolvf.

VandaMan · 06-09-2010, 03:02 AM

I know I already posted one of wolvf's stories, but he's just so amazing I can't resist. Here's the newest one:

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with in truth ourlifes are granted to us for only one reason and that is to die
what we hav found is to live with iun our time
for there were three people that found each other
people of heart and soul and that just did not giv a fuk
sand volari and kenneth
Volari allways had a cookie in her hands
sand was a want to be hard ass but he had a good heart
and kenneth well he was just kenneth allways with a beer
[Dark Sorrow: u grinding now]
no telling fuking stories
that is all so far
[I Hate Sand: That's the end of the story?]
[Volari: To be continued?]
yess i need to pisssss

VandaMan · 03-29-2010, 10:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Devkarven

man i love this story you should write fictional comics

keep up the good work.

Writing I can manage (sorta) but a comic... I can barely do stick figures :P

03-29-2010, 07:13 AM	#1
Devkarven Pledge Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 1	omg where do you get this stuff :D this would be a really great fictional story if we could like add something with us running into a alsuis zerg ten foot from the syrtis gate and a even bigger syrtis zerg behind them not attacking them. man i love this story you should write fictional comics keep up the good work.

03-29-2010, 09:45 AM	#2
JennyfromtheBlock Apprentice Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 64	Fabulous story I <3 Fiction... __________________ Haven\|Ignis\|Apocalypse Jenny from the Block \| Naughty Nymph \| Naughty Vixen \| Camilla \| Atomic Betty \| Dixie Queen It's the end of the world as we know it and I feel fine. - REM

03-30-2010, 12:53 AM	#6
WhateverUSMC Initiate Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Peterborough, Ontario Posts: 189	Sorry I'm late on this, but this gem.... a long long time ago in a galexy farr far awaw away a virgen was once to be found his name was JOHN lost with out any knowledge he knew not what was up he never knew a woman with in his heart or love with in his soul herb is getting attacked now so upon his life with in his prayers he found JANE the only friend he could ever kno that day upon his happiness the only smile he could share was his last THEY FOUND A LONELY MAN TRYING TO EXCApe the closet DEAD UPON THE FLOOR WITH IN HIS THE WORDS LIES DIED WITH A SMILE sry people i am going to get killd here tell me where u r cum by yah my... as they raised his head thinking it was a true warior named john they found out it was u reading this that was truly cumming out the closet was no more i want another lezbien lover there great ...made up for this whole crappy month. Thanks, and keep on posting! __________________ o Q o (WM), Martok (WM), Wyatt Earp (53), T'Pol (52), P'Tak (57), Rotarrin (38)

03-29-2010, 06:08 PM	#4
veluchami Initiate Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: San Francisco Posts: 117	I wonder how you come up with plots for your 'fictional' stories Again, nicely written, Van. My best part is 'ignis marksmen making pincusion out of the syrtis' lol.

03-29-2010, 06:26 PM	#5
bois Count Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Trinidad and Tobago Posts: 1,194	Nicely written. You certainly have a knack for fiction writing. So good it could almost be something that happened... I enjoy these stories. Artec